this could be a good piece. it needs more emphasis on the question you're asking , "what is love" ? perhaps arrangement of the line but you held out a hand in the dark for me. rewording or an inclination to the hand in the dark being held out.
keep writing !
teresa
it is an emotional piece. perhaps an actual experience. the best writings come from heartfelt feelings we've felt. i enjoy reading pieces i can relate to through experience.
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