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Review by todd68
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I started reading the first of the 10 updates you did before you finished and I was very upset it ended. At the pace the story was going i would have read anouther 50 chapters. If the ex-wife is that bad use the medalion to become the ex-wife and do something that will cause her to loose custidy of the child.
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Review by todd68
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
Unless mom is the second wife she had the older sister(Becca) at the age of 12 followed by your brother(Ron) at age 14.
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