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Review of Lonely Wolf  
Review by Tornadopelt
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Honestly, the reason I gave it a 4.5 was because it had an INTERACTIVE issue: you can't seem to help out the wolf, there's no way to help the wolf, and it shows her sad with no savior to help her. I'd like it a lot more if it were interactive, with the same opening chapter. Plus, these two parts of the poem, "Then the deafening roar of a gun shot carries across on the wind" and "The hunter who's steady aim took her, Left her on the hill" are very disconcerting. She gets killed without anyone to save her! At least allow her a chance to be saved, alright?
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