What I like most about this poem is the imagery. You use metaphor's extremely well and seem to really know how to control them so that they don't overwhellm the reader. I also love how you throw the reader into the action while leaving the actual events open so that its relatable. You did an amazing job with this one. Good work.
I really like this poem. Firstly, you have guts to post your oppinion like this. Its a great thing to do. I agree with what you say and I think you said it all well. The only thing I can think of to improve this work is if you used a few more powerful words. Its extremely goood as is though.
This is fairly good, but a little hard to follow. It gets a tad tiresome. It was somewhat hard to keep reading. I felt like just skipping down to the end by around the third or fourth stanza. It would help if you shortened the poem by using more consice words.
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