It's a nice poem to read...wearing a mask to make ourselves believe we belong even though we don't sounds too much like real life the title explains it all...a facade, yeah I know that word just by seeing people in my life, but we all put on a facade at times to either keep things hidden or make ourselves appear more than we are, but some time in that whole facade you let your guard down and reveal the real person who lies behind the mask. Once that person is revealed it's up to you to decide if you are you or the person you pretend to be, me personally I don't care what people think of me, because from the day I was born to the day I die, I'm going to be me, the man I see in the mirror, the man who loves living, the man who is in love...that's who I am and I can't pretend I'm not him because no matter what facade is shown the same guy you see in mirror when you wake is the same guy you'll see when you go to the mirror at night...
Interesting...I thought it was about a man who was about to lose his wife...but it turned out to be a play, and the leading male made Janet sick because of the garlic he ate...sorry just isn't good enough when you make someone sick from what you eat...and that's why I liked it...
I'm over here cracking up thanks to the antics of that cat...the rubber band one is my favorite...how a cat would rig up such a thing just to shot a rubber band at you is hilarious...and your mother's advice seemed to be the wrong type of advice...since there was missing parts to her info...can't wait for the 2003 version
Perfect story...dear old Possy...I'm over here tearing up because of this...such antics and joy that he brought, but at the same time there are only memories left, it's nice to have something to remember, but it's not as good as experiencing new things with the people or animals you experienced it with... you deserve a 5.0 because I got lost in this story...be made me smile, made me laugh, it made sad, and almost cry...this is the emotion that a reader wants to feel and this why I gave you an honest to goodness review from the heart.
Tumblesalt is really somersault , and I remember Sept. 11 all too well...I was in 8th grade when that happened...in English class up in the front row to see the replay and the computer image replays...man that was a bad day for the country...
Now for the review that goes with the 5.0
Fred is the most humorous cat I have ever read about...and what he did to your nephew was simply an I told you so moment, plus you have two baby possums I bet you have stories to tell about Punzel and Violet..., and last but not least...the part of what he did during Stars and Stripes I hate classical music too but if someone is watching something I hate I walk out of the room geez the cat should have been hung for that (not really)
Read at my own pace on this...I'm a little confused though not on the antics of Fred the humorous cat, but on the change from Abeille's portfolio to your portfolio are you two the same person or did she allow you to have these stories about Fred...because I love reading these stories about Fred and what he's done next...a cat like that is something that is one of kind...and I'm glad that I had the chance to read the 2000 antics...
Nice...this makes me wanna read The Dragon Rises...man I didn't know this kind of work was inside of that book...man this is a great poem...I love your style L.A. Powell, I know when I become well known like you that I will reflect on your works...and know that I have reached the place in my life where I'm glad to be consider a great writer...like I see you as a great writer. 5.0 for a great writer...if there was a 6.0 you would have it.
This one maybe for the Christmas season but I like it a lot...it makes me feel like it's Christmas time all over again...you're still weird..., but I'm getting used to you...so this review is based on you...you're a weird writer as I can see from your static items...but you're a good weird though because I want to read your stuff...so this is why you get a 5.0
Cool...this one was weird again but I followed it all the way through to see where you were going with this...your style maybe weird but it is very insightful to a reader like me...for doing something that makes you think this long and hard on it is what a reader wants to see. This craving for things that we have to think about is what all people want, and that is why you get a 5.0 on this review.
Hmmm....a toad...a cat...rebirth...and a samurai...so the toad fought off the cat...but he didn't win, so he's waiting for his next life to come before he can probably get his vengence on that cat...but he was still victorious in his own way, because he stood up to the cat and gave it his best...that's what I thought it was about...there can be more than one interpertation of this and I know you have you own
I couldn't stop laughing at his revenge...it was so funny...Fred sounds like a great cat...I wonder what other tales of fred you have...because he's the kind of cat that reminds me of Garfield and I love that cat...overall i couldn't stop myself from laughing it was just so great to read something like this that really tickled my insides...
Nice comedical diary...I love the stuff that fred did like trying to get out of the house...and him being all hyper active all the time...it was quite amusing to read something that was interesting and loveable. I especially loved the part about him eating the cake frosting, leaving the cake with no frosting, and him with frosting on his whiskers...it had me chuckling like crazy...overall this a great diary post...and very humorous indeed.
I like it I can tell from your creativity that I choose a good one when I sent you the invite...I know you won't let me down..see ya in Young Minds...p.s. please email me back tellin me if ur making a character or playing Mark (which we need a Mark..)
I don't know what to say it was good yet I didn't really see the meaning in it...I think you have a good writing style but this didn't really speak to me like I expected it to...hmm what else to say...umm can't think of anything...:P see ya later...hope you enjoyed my view on this...
hmmm this is another short one that I have to find the meaning of like the other...hmmm it's about a sea gull for sure but what does the sea gull represent...maybe it represents a sense of freedom that one longs for at a time in our life, and the wind is our guide in life and the sea is the people we see in the vastness of the world we live upon...so the gull is ourselves in a sense of speaking
man why is it the poems that you have to dig into so short...it's a good poem, it makes you think about what you truly mean in those thw stanzas...it represts life...the shortness of this poem represents the shortness of human life...if we don't take time to stop and look around it will pass us by before we even knew it began...man I love trying to find the meaning in short poems.
Whoa i enjoyed that it was moving...man I felt myself with my hand on my face reading every line like it was a poem I had read for years. Your book Yellow Bandana is going to be great, because this excerpt was perfect...nothing more than perfection from this poem and I want to see many more from you
Hmmm...trying to understand that is very complex. I liked the style of the haiku, but it ws very perplexing..maybe it was just me, I don't know..it seems decent, but it is a haiku nethertheless, and it lives up to a haiku's standards..so who am I to say it's wrong or right..I can only say I was perplexed.
Whoa who could imagine that a few words could have such meaning. The leaves, the wind, and the bluebird..each has it's own meaning. My version of the meaning is that everything is born from the earth, we all are like leaves, our lives are picked up by the hands of time which is represented by te wind. And once we settle down from the wind our life ends and a beautiful song of rememberance is sung for us. Aww what an interpertation.
Nice poll i'm glad that many people didn't try to lie and say that they are perfect because no is truly perfect, and that's why we love to make improvements.
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you deserve a 5.0 because I got lost in this story...be made me smile, made me laugh, it made sad, and almost cry...this is the emotion that a reader wants to feel and this why I gave you an honest to goodness review from the heart.
