The one regret we all wish we could deal with at times, the chance to say goodbye to a loved one, I'm not sure what words would suffice from the pain of this one regret...all I can say is I felt that pain with my best friend when he left this world, never having the chance to say goodbye hurts to the bottom of my soul. So as words of parting just remember they would want us to smile always.
I recall the Salem Witch Trails lesson I had in highschool and being accused of something that you're probably innocent of isn't just at all, but those trying times were always unfair killing the people they had known for most of their lives out of plain unknown fear that was so pointless yet their point of views were too strong to sway, and that made things so unfair. I really personally think that those times were so wrong and probably the worst for anyone living a normal life, but it couldn't be avoided for now it's just another page in the school history books. Well take care.
This piece was powerful indeed, the words shown seemed simple at first until I got more and more into the depth of the piece, and I truly feel like the ending was the most important part of the ensemble, because the greatest gift of all is knowing that the one you love won't be in anymore pain anymore. Well take care.
That was a funny piece indeed, loved reading all the way through to see what the title was suggesting, didn't expect that to be what the title was hint towards, and I'm glad I wasn't expecting to come in that form since I got a well deserved laugh off it. Well take care.
Wow what a predicament to be in where you lose your sanity and you don't want to believe it at all. I know we all feel like we're on the edge of losing our sanity when we get backed into tough situations, and I hate how that feels. Well until I figure a cure for that feeling I'll part ways for now, take care.
Ah the mysterious world of the chatrooms, the type of talking they use is quite teenish no matter what age they are on the other side of the pc, the drama to the normal chats seem simplistic at most times, while others you can find someone to talk real to you, but it's rare most days. Well take care.
A very touching piece the words shown are very moving along with very thoughtful in the way they were used. This piece is apparently old so that means the love that was mentioned has aged like fine wine, but never lost it's touch just mature from when it first began. Enjoyed the pieces I've read, take care.
Nice piece about the woods I've noticed you mention Goddess in your pieces a lot of times, and are you referring to a higher power or a woman you love. Well other than that I enjoyed the piece I've read, take care.
A piece about memories interesting to say teh least, we all recall our memories whether good or bad, as you stated in your piece it's easier for us to recall the good memories because they were meant to shine we try and block out the bad ones at times unless we force ourselves to recall the events so that we can learn from our mistakes. Nice piece indeed, take care.
Quite an intriguing piece this was, the depth in the questions asked made me think a lot about the things you hit upon, this piece overall is a great read and I liked the meaning behind the words indeed. Well take care.
Wow...what a state of mind to have to feel these vivid emotions, my mind feels so lost in the sea of word portrayed in this piece I began to see myself as the character for a while there trying to find balance to my way. I enjoyed this piece a lot, well that's all for now. Take care.
Plot- Trying to find a man who has committed serious crimes
Setting-unknown
Character-William R. Flagg
Suggestions-suggestions WOW what suggestions should be stated after reading that.
My Personal Opinion-I'm just lost I took the time to read this since I saw it at the top of my browser as a sponsored item, at first I thought this might not be good, but after carefully reading, getting drawn into each passing line, I began to open my eyes, to see what truly lied behind the short excerpts I reviewed before, never took the time to stop and read what was there behind the excerpt, glad I took time to read this. Truly astonishing learning things like this, I swear I won't be able to look at the next excerpt the same, along with that this piece was moving, captivating, intriguing, stunning, inquiring, and drop dead terrific. I am speechless now on what to say, other than I am so glad I read this piece, since I'm out of words I bid you farewell.
Overall Impression-For other readers drop your jaw good
My Personal Opinion-Good piece about your friend, shows the emotions of how to deal with a hole in your heart. Nice to see you read your works again in such a long time, well that's all I have for now, so take care.
Overall Impression-For other readers there'sa a hole in my heart.
Suggestions-What does feign mean...that's all I'm wondering since it was a tricky word to try and define from the context.
My Personal Opinion-The old english way of writing has it's ups and downs, it sounds very intellectual, yet the flaw is some people can't relate to the style, but it's just a part of being a writer. The style you used is effective in it's own way, even though I did get stuck on a feign...but nethertheless it did serve it's purpose to reflect the emotions, either personal or just ideas. So overall it was something...maybe though to grasp at first glance, but at least I was interested in it. Take care.
{c:}Overall Impression-For other readers take your time on this piece.
Plot-A lonely boy trying to find a way to pass the time
Setting-At Nathan's home
Characters-Nathan, George, and the father
Suggestions-I have suggestions about what to change in this piece.
My Personal Opinion-I liked the tale of Nathan and his misadventure with his imaginary friend George. It was quite funny to see the all time favorite kid line, 'what had happened was...' overall I think the piece had good depth and meaning in it's tone. Nathan is like any kid some get lonelier than others yet they all get lonely and want something to do, which sometimes lead to be trouble. I'm glad the father realized how lonely Nathan was, since it was needed for him to realize the issue then after realizing there was an issue he needed to decide his action, and he decided to spend more time with his son. So this was a good piece from the author I've grown to love. Take care, see ya around, and you never know when Crysolyn may stop by again.
Overall Impression-For other readers, it's quite an interesting piece if you like to read.
My Personal Opinion-It's hard when you have to sacrifice something to either better yourself or allow someone to better themselves, pain is always there during a sacrifice, it hurts worse than a fatal cut at times, yet it gets better, once you realize that it was for the best. This was an interesting piece, take care.
Overall Impression-For other readers you'll find your own view.
My Personal Opinion-Okay good piece with a good meaning, check your contractions, you'll notice what I mean, and other than that I understood the part about facing one's own demons. So take care.
Overall Impression-For other readers...your own view.
Plot-A woman contemplating about the abuse she's dealt with from the hands of one man
Setting-At their home
Character-an abusive man and the abused woman
Suggestions-none come to mind
My Personal Opinion-Abuse, always a strong subject for any person, no words seem right to explain what has been shown, it was a powerful piece full of pain and sadness, the words became the images in my mind which allowed me see the pain and suffering that this character went through. Such a powerful piece indeed, and that's all I can muster to say since the power has left me speechless.
Overall Impression-For other readers drop your jaw...because it's that powerful
Plot-A man on a fishing trip gets more than he bargained for
Setting-At a riverbank
Character-Clarence
Suggestions-Look carefully for spelling errors, like coulple should be couple.
My Personal Opinion-Took some time to actually see what was on the other end of the fishing line, I thought some weird 10 foot monster was going to come out and eat him when it said a something dark began to emerge. Quite a surprise to find a girl who was out to take his life, overall what you expect isn't what you get
Overall Impression-For other readers take your time to see where the horror is since it builds up quite nicely.
This piece is very interesting to me because I feel like that but it's loneliness though...I hate feeling this way yet it's there no one wants to take time listen to me nor do they care about me. So I understand the broken part, I feel broken everyday all alone in my own world...and no one but the one I love can help me out of this pain, yet she's not here and it sucks.
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Hmm the story has come to the end for me, this is all clear now, the steam on the glass has been wiped away for me to see the reflection in the mirror. It's you standing there with your soul bare to me, it took me a little while to fully understand the whole evolution now that I see the final version I know I can review this piece with my head held high knowing what you write about who you are.
So this piece is good, the issues with that boyfriend are clear now, you are better off without him, it's not worth the questioning...I would rather be alone for the rest of my life than to question why am I with someone for the rest of my days. There are only two places that should be peaceful for people, their homes and their graves, so if you can't have peace in your home what is the point of going the issue, so just do what's best for you, and this is good bye for now. See ya.
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Hmm he left you...I think I understand the whole story now, it took some time to comprehend what was going on, but in evolutionary poetry everything explains itself after you've read the other works that go along the evolution chain, and I really feel bad about that relationship ending, but as you said it was a goodbye forever.
This piece is needed for me to see who the person behind the words, and it allowed me to peer into your very essence. You are a very complex person who does things to please herself, the writing is just a way to allow your feelings to be shown to others, and I admire that feature in you. We as writers grow each day whether good or bad we grow, we mature as people, and that's a part of life, so the works we create evolve not because we intend it to at times, it evolves because we evolved, and we see the world differently than we did in an earlier stage in our lives.
So overall this piece was crucial to me, and see ya next review.
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Hmm this is a different type of piece than I was previous reading, this isn't part of the evolutionary poetry in way... I will be reviewing this piece very thoroughly.
The point is shown that you want to wait for your true love, that is a good cause, and that is simply the simple version of the review.
Now for the complex version...
The piece doesn't exactly fit into the evolutionary poetry in many ways, it doesn't show the same emotions like before with the relationship growth the ups and downs, the normalcy is so overrated of what a relationship should be, because we believe this hype that we should do like the actors on television do, but they have a writer to script them on what to do and say. So why buy into the hype live your life that you were born into, in other times be you. This piece is good, it's original, and that's basically the wrap up of my words on this piece. See ya next review.
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Day two of my reviewing on your evolutionary poetry..., so let's jump right back into the norm then.
This piece was a good read, your emotions are clear, the intensity is shown as well, and that is a great factor to allowing the reader understand the writer. Nice meaning about how much you care for that one person...
The evolution of each poem seems to be on the basis of relationships, which is very simple to figure from the emotions poured each stanza, along with the titles, so the emotions are real which brings an edge to a poet's meaning, because they know the feeling all too well. The definition of evolution poetry is unknown to few, but I have decided what my own definition it is pieces which each serve there own meaning to a poet's own life or mind, some are made to put their emotions out, and others are just to create something that ties to the last poem. Evolutionary poetry is a very hard concept to grasp because in order to write it you must focus on one subject that sometimes could be a bad experience to relive, but anyone decides write evolutionary poetry has more courage than anyone else I know, because it shares the vulnerable side of your very own soul, and that is very crucial to a good piece.
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