The author seems really passionate about basketball and they seem to really enjoy the sport. I would like to see more about why the author enjoys basketball and what they enjoy about it. The author could use some more word choices and a few more stronger lines in the poem but I thought it was decent.
This poem was very nice and I enjoyed reading it. I liked the passion and feeling that was so clear in the poem. I enjoyed the comparisons made and all the choices in phrases. A lot of the word choices were great but there could have been more in some of the more meaningful parts of the poem. The author did a really great job.
I thought this poem was pretty inspiring and I felt that it could help someone who is depressed or someone who doesn't believe in themselves. Some word choices could be stronger just to add a little more emotion to the poem, but the over all point was clear. It was nice and the author did very well in my opinion.
I liked this poem but there are a few things I would change about it. I was a little confused about the beginning because it went from talking about how great life is, to talking about pregnancy and making the best decision for you. I enjoyed some of the word choices but I feel that others could have been better. Over all it was good.
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