Thank you for sharing. I really like the imagery in this poem, especially within your second and third stanzas. Maybe some punctuation at the end of lines could help the reader? I would be interested to know what you were thinking at the time or if there was some inspiration for the poem? Keep writing :)
Thank you for sharing, Krazy Anonymous. I read this poem and thought of all the times I felt I had things to say but seemingly no ability to be able to put them down coherently, albeit at all - like brain diarrhea!
Looking through again, I notice that vowel is misspelled in the first stanza. Could I also suggest some more punctuation throughout, like commas and full stops, especially in the fourth and fifth stanzas?
Keep writing please! :)
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