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Review by Ms. Hines
Rated: E | (3.5)
I thought your poem was good and spoke of a true friend. Your poem was on point and had me anxious to read the next line. You have potential newbie and you should continue to express yourself in the form of writing because you are good at it. I enjoyed your piece and will continue to check for your work. If you can check out some of my stuff and from one newbie to another, welcome to Writing.com! Ms. Hines
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Review by Ms. Hines
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Well written,

I am stuck- I am going with the second child but something is telling me to go with the third. Life is funny you know, when our parents rush to be grown, the children are often labeled as mistakes, but never think of yourself as a mistake. As for the poem, I thought it was good. If you can let me know if my guess was right and check out my portfolio when you get a chance. Keep Writing!!

Ms. Hines
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Review by Ms. Hines
Rated: E | (3.5)
I thought your poem was good. I thought the message behind your poem was excellent. I noticed a few grammatical errors but nothing too major. Keep writing because I can tell you have a lot of positive things to say and the world is ready for them. I enjoyed your piece and encourage you to continue writing. Trust me, from one newbie to another, these reviews helped me to see I really did have a talent I was letting go to waste before joining Writing.Com! So welcome and Write On!!

Ms. Hines
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Review of All For Naught  
Review by Ms. Hines
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice work,

I thought your poem was moving. Your choice of words showed me this poem came from deep inside you. The choice made at the end was a wise one and I have been faced with that same decision at times. I think your poem makes people think of the time when they too acted selfishly and had to submit even if they did not want to. Well Written. I enjoyed reading it.

Ms. Hines
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Review of All My Love  
Review by Ms. Hines
Rated: E | (4.0)
I thought this poem was well written. You really put your all into this and I can tell by your choice of words. I hope your Valentine feels this message deep down the way you intended when it was written.
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