an interesting twist on the usual princess type story~!I think it could've done with more of the princes's adventure or at least what exactly sent him there in the first place, but over all it was a good story! Keep it up and you will make brilliant stories!
I know the story's old but it has so much potential and so many unfinished chapters. If your out of ideas ask the community, but if you just don't want to update it yourself then you are wasting your creativity and just leaving a started project to collect dust. The main thing you could do to improve it overall is just make one complete rout begging to end.
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