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Review of Janitor  
Review by D.A.Cook
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I liked the character and the story. I think you articulated the aging old buford well with some choice phrasing and a suitable pace. The suspense bit at the end didn't really get me, but maybe it wasn't meant for that. Not sure.
Cheers,
D.A.Cook
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Review of Basketball  
Review by D.A.Cook
Rated: E | (2.5)
could maybe more intense
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Review of The Pit  
Review by D.A.Cook
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
If this is about the holocaust I don,t think they exported people from tel aviv to get murdered in poland, tragic tale never the less
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Review of alone.  
Review by D.A.Cook
Rated: E | (3.5)
I Like the vague imagery
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Review of Thomas' Pain  
Review by D.A.Cook
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
One of the best I've read so far on here.
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Review by D.A.Cook
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
university aint so bad, you can play guitar there
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Review of The Silver Fox  
Review by D.A.Cook
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
kind of makes me wanna go for a pint.
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Review by D.A.Cook
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I like this one. Didn't lose interest the whole way, the pacing was good, the story original.
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Review of Rabbit vs Turtle  
Review by D.A.Cook
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Enjoyable, nice and compact. Good dialogue.
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