I have been a voracious sci-fi reader all my life. And it takes quite a novel to keep me till the end. This is one awesome piece of sci-fi work. The plot is well set, and the true to the words of the author, it contains something for everyone. The little preludes at the beginning of the episode are good and give a sense of direction. The introductory pictures at the beginning of each episode are misleading, either remove them or replace them with better ones, although some are quite artistic . The story telling is good to read because its descriptive of surroundings, objects and the plot. This helps imagine the plot as if I were there in the mid of the scene, keep it up.
Honestly I am eager to be able to read the rest of the story. I am too excited to continue on the journey of Julius and Chorus. Please dont make me Beg for the rest of the episodes
---- Venom
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. The story telling is good to read because its descriptive of surroundings, objects and the plot. This helps imagine the plot as if I were there in the mid of the scene, keep it up.