This is a very beautiful piece. It is something that every single one of us, can relate to. I'm not saying I know your pain, your loss; I'm saying that I know you're *in* pain, I know you *feel* loss. And you managed to say it in such a beautiful and to the point way.
Keep on writing,
and I'm so, so sorry for your loss.
Regards,
Freyja
As for my first day on this website, within the first hour to be exact, your poem was the first one I read, and it is a very, very, beautiful thread. It's kind of funny actually, I've been writing poetry since the age of nine, and it took me years and years for a taste to find. I don't believe in fate, and I don't believe in destiny, but I have to say, this being a coincidence, that the first poem I read in here tastes exactly how I like them, seems very suspicious indeed.
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