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Review of Serenity  
Review by Wakinyan
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very nice piece of writing. I was quickly caught in the motion much like the read in a river on its way to the sea. Keep up the good work.
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Review of Meadow  
Review by Wakinyan
Rated: E | (3.5)
I like how the poem flows. After the third or fourth reading, I began to come up with alternate word choices. For example, the "tinkling" like crystal makes me think of "tinkling" being used as a verb for urination. The word put the wrong image in my mind and caused me a momentary pause to connect it with the crystal. Perhaps "ringing" might be more apppropriate. Crystal does also ring, I think.
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