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Review of Cutting Glass  
Review by PulpDog
Rated: E | (3.5)
Interesting piece but needs a bit more refining.

"Cutting Glass" has moments of greatness, but also moments that are awkward and break the flow.

These lines should be looked at again:

with out anytime
or my self?

On a positive note I really like your use of imagery and your choice of subject matter. Apart from the lines I mentioned above, the poem does give off an interesting mood and has potential to become a sophisticated piece of writing.

Keep it up!
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