This interactive story has a few gripping points. The encompassing story with its mysterious characters and quests makes for an exciting premise. This is one of the gripping points I mentioned before.
The five options at the beginning of the story gives participants a lot of choices and is not limiting at all. I liked it that it began with more than three options. As the story progresses it'll be good if the options stay at three or more if possible.
The introduction to the small boy added a good twist and an added mystery to Dauphin's own quest to see the King. Straight away two important question pops up in the readers mind and stays there until they get to the King.
This interactive story gripped me from the beginning until I reached Chapter 8 and I wanted to think deeper on it to maybe write a chapter from here on.
Great job!
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