Yes, I was hooked with the first sentence. My immediate reaction was, 'what is flensing? And that kept me reading. The sexual tension beginning at the second sentence also invited me to continue reading. I want to read more
Hi Kyle,
I like your ability to write about a very difficult subject, sharing your painful experiences with such subtly and clarity that moved the story forward through some of the stages of coming to terms with what I know is the heart rendering process of becoming conscious of the social, political, psychological and very personal experiences of the transgender reality. I look forward to the next chapter.
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