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Review by Ash
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really enjoyed your introduction! I especially loved the last two sentences, they hooked me and I want to read more! The only suggestion I really have is to perhaps make your paragraphs a little clearer by indenting or spacing. It's just a formatting thing but I think it would make it flow a little better. Great job, keep going!
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