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Review by Ocean Wave
Rated: E | (4.0)
It is a little confusing, as some of the dialogue belongs to, as it seems, no one. Also I would love to see more detail, as detail makes a novel. What does the girl look like? How did she get to this world? Why do her parents hate her? All that many of the readers would like to know. Other then that, it was a great read, and a very original story. ^.^
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