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Review by Will.S.Rooney
Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved this story. One of my favorite things about it is the use of repitition. You did a great job in writing each and every line. I love the ending.

One of my favorite paragraphs that really got me in the story is the following:

Perhaps partially pixilated poodles painting platypuses is a most peculiar sight to see.
But the poodle pranced preposterously while painting paw paws, pears, and peas.

Great Story!
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