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Review by W.C
Rated: E | (2.5)
This is a nice poem.

I just have a question, was this word usage meant to be one worded ?

-"in sight"

Thank you for sharing

-William
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Review of My Own Stupidity  
Review by W.C
Rated: E | (3.0)
Good read, wish it was longer.

Thank you for sharing

-William
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Review of Words to say  
Review by W.C
Rated: E | (2.5)
This is a very interesting piece in which I absorbed some feelings from it that it may or may not have been created to inflict upon the reader.

May I suggest considering perhaps reformatting the ways in which some of your lines come out ?
In example: "Quite contradictory, even to me" to "Even to me, quite contradictory"

Just a suggestion.

Thank you for sharing

-William
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Review of Armchair Athlete  
Review by W.C
Rated: E | (3.0)
This was a very amusing poem or combination of intriguing writing of the sorts-- obviously in which rhyming all along the way.
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