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Review of Going Away  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Very nice story you have here. It's short and simple, but very touching. I especially like the use of her deceased father coming to take her mother back with him to Heaven. Very nice touch, overall I give it a 4.0. No spelling or grammar errors that I can see, very nice.
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