I would like to know Claudia a little better to see what he misses so much but it still evokes alot of intrigue and emotion. Its got a great amount of passion without being over invasive.
i hope you keep writing, i would like to read more of your stuff, maybe tommorow i will check out a bit more of your port.
Please have a look at mine also, its only got one piece, its a chapter.
There was one point where i thought there was too many descriptions of too many things.... in the elevator.
Apart from this it is a really great piece. thanks for that.
My chapter is called "Moiety" please give it a read.
wil
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