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Review by wlax1964
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
I read this and am a bit under observations light. I do not feel that I like or dislike what i just read. If you compare a short bit of words to others, i see that you could call it insightful or you could say where is the rest. I feel that when i was 17 years old and ready to take my final exam for graduation, one leap away from basic training, and one step away from a plausible future of success I was a dreaming, like many, young man. Now that I am in my older years i have the elasticity of knowledge from past that predicts the future and my dreams are still in the back of my mind yet not on the for front of my future. If you could win the lottery i would say that my life with my spouse was that lottery. Far be it from me to be a simple minded but isnt that what life is in our future years to come? Count your chickens or so Roy Rogers said while talking to Audie Murphy, if you do not praise what you have you never except what you get.
Your small writing here has some thought provoking ideas and i feel it was well written but to what end?
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Review by wlax1964
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I liked the introduction and miss direction from the 1314 burning, however the idea of the man shooting the arrow at the cart distracted me for a second. I love a good historical action yet i would have like to have heard about the man shooting the arrow. Call me stupid but no one ever hears from the stand point of the hired killer, just a brief on what he might be feeling before he kills people with flames. Other wise well written.
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