this piece stirred up many emotions in me. Mostly sadness and desperation.
I have the feeling that someone has given all she can give to someone who just refuses her...thats just my perception though
Wow!! This write really envokes many different emotions in the reader. I felt excited and nervous and in the end sadness. There is a wonserful display of imagery here making me feel as if i was standing there watching the love story ...or prehaps, the ghostly dream...
Very well done my friend. I cannot wait to read more from you.
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