I hadn't read a limerick in a long time. I had forgotten how much fun they could be. Thank you for sharing your work all were well written and most made me laugh. My favorites being "Friends Like This.." and "Bagpipes". I look forward to reading some of your other work.
I am not a published author nor am I an expert reviewer. My comments are my opinion. And an opinion is just that, an opinion. Overall I liked the poem and the message it conveys. The only suggestion that I have is that perhaps the poem could be expanded. These emotions kill more than just friendships, therefore a broader scope as to how we as people are affected in all relationships by these emotions would make this piece pack more of a punch,.
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