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Review of The Fairy's Hovel  
Review by Dani
Rated: E | (4.0)
Oh my gosh. I will never swat a fly again!
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Review of To do list  
Review by Dani
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a nice one!
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Review by Dani
Rated: E | (4.0)
This poem is something so many people can relate to, though it is a sad time to go through. I had this sense of dread for the person in the poem, but by the end I felt pretty good about where he was heading! I like that he was walking away, realistic, and not so caught up in the bad that he forgot about the good.

The tempo of the poem was pretty good. I stumbled along a little bit, but I kind of liked that; that poor guy sure was stumbling! It worked for the feeling of the poem, but not if you were aiming for classic form.

All in all, pretty good!
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