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Review by yks
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Churn the bell
and squeeze the shell
let the day be shy
play the light
and burn inside
no mercy in the golden fight
through the book
the longing could
taste of freedom
is only wisdom
another two
to make it through
spirit of discernment
and knowledge from testament

Cheers
Yks
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Review of a woman  
Review by yks
Rated: E | (5.0)
I had agreed and am again
such profound writing that means everything
to women i cheers and to women i believe
the truth is reveal and you had show it once again
thank you.

Nice poem that is

Cheers
Yks
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Review of " a rose"  
Review by yks
Rated: E | (5.0)
I clasp my hand and believe i had
to many i read, the "rose" give me a lead
dear friend, i say
what a wonderful words you lay
i try to flow
and inspiration is grow
I have agree
the best poem everyone see.

Cheers
Yks
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Review of Free-Falling  
Review by yks
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like your poem :)

Yks
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