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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Very descriptive and to the point.. (I’m not sure if they first few are still on me but the tiny heated pressures, are I believe, are becoming more frequent.) The line here I cut and pasted needs to be refraised.. I enjoyed your reading and I like how you captivted the audiance in suspence and not knowing these were butterflies until later on in the stry. Keep up the good work.
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