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Review by zarkon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
this is a great read. i just love the way it flips from present to past, one explaining and complimenting the other. the darkness of it is a draw to me because when i write it tends to lean in that direction. the descriptive words are excellent, i just loved the description of the analyst. i am not good enough to rate it in the technical aspects of it as far as grammar goes but i cant see anything wrong with that part of it either. the words all flow and compliment each other and that is what i look for in a story. keep up the good work, i will look for more from you
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