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by Gat
Rated: ASR · Poetry · Other · #1004276
a piece in progress, a companion piece to Frozen Rage. Based on an unusual view of joy
your face lights up
and i feel it too
your infectious laughter
an oppressive force
distracting me
filling the air
free and unbound
smothering me
i can't escape
its everywhere
in everything you do
and i Hate it



Thinking about re-writing it from a second person prospective. I still need to work on the persona i think.

Companion piece:
 Frozen Rage  (ASR)
a piece based on cold anger
#1004164 by Gat
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