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by Angela
Rated: E · Poetry · Action/Adventure · #1052291
Here is a poem that i made up with no revisory. Please rate it and tell me what you think!
Life Upon A Star *Star*

Ever dream about how Life is different
What Life is upon a star
Mabye no more anger and pain
Or more pain and suffering
You never know, even though you dream
You never feel, even though you think
Life might be more cruel on a star
Or it could be more pleasant
There might be no more hating
Or the hating would double
There could be a cure for violence
Or there it can be more contagious
You never know what life can be
Until you experience it somewhere else
Dreaming about Life upon a star
Will not make it what you want
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