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Rated: 18+ · Novel · Drama · #1098535
a story of a girl who escapes a hard life and finds herdelf in one boy
(narroation): we begin in the morning the james family arquing like usuall lets get to know the characters alittle shall we, the mother(lilian) is struggling not to be a heroin addicted any more for lilahs sake she has clumpy hair comparable to a rats nest, also she has dark bags under her eyes. the father(frank) is never home and when he is hes drunk he has black hair neatly put back in a ponytail but yet hes very dirty and spaces out alot. and now our main character lilah shes very pretty but hidden under black makeup and chains....

MOM: FRANK GET OUT HERE!

FATHER: WHAT THE HELL DO YOU WANT LILIAN!

MOM:You cant keep getting drunk like this frank its hurting lilah!

Father: Shut the fuck up you fucking druggie go SHOOT UP BITCH !

MOM: AT LEAST IM TRYING TO FUCKING CHANGE!!!

FATHER: mabye our FUCKING DAUGHTER shoudlnt be a FUCKING goth weirdo!

Mother: OH FRANK FUCK YOU DONT IN SULT YOUR DAUGHTER

Father: FUCK OUR WEIRDO DAUGHTER!

MOM:FRANK!


the argument is inturupted by lilah walking in from school both parent quiet down as lilah starts to talk then run to her rooom

Lilah: nice to see you two FUCKING GETTING ALONG!
(Lilah runs in to her room locking the door)

MOM:LILAH PLEASE COME BACK

Father: o look what you did you had to argue about me drinking well..(taking a sip of whiskie)you know what i cant fucking take this shit im leaving....!

Mom: FRANK NO COME...(he slaps lilian, and runs out drunk and staggering)

lilah hears here moms crash and comes out to see whats going on all she sees is her mom lying there with her hand on her face crying

Lilah:MOM!!!

MOM: sweetie im ok just go back in your room

Lilah: did he HIT YOU MOM!

MOM: GO LILAH!

lilah runs in to her dark black painted room and cries heavily , then... moments later she pulls out a box with photos and a hollow bottom containing a razor blade stained with blood next to that a bloody rag lilah dose three deeply impacted cuts on her right arm her mom calls her And she slips up her wrist bands and goes out

MOM: LILAH!

LILAH: what?

MOM:im going out for a while i wont be back until late tonight so set your alarm clock ok?

Lilah: ok

lilah wakes up to find no one home her moms not back yet she thinks oh well and walks to school,she gets there and meets with her other goth friends who think they have issues but compared to dear lilah they dont.. her best freind anna is talking with her

Anna: Hey lilah wats up?

Lilah: nothing much (accidently dropping her wrist band)

Anna: did you fuking cut again? i thought you were stoping

Lilah: go fuck off anna...just leave me alone about that shit

Anna: sorry i thought..never mind (bell rings) well i got to go to class see you later?

Lilah:yeah!

lilah gets to class wich a new guy a ,guy that looks of the island decent

Teacher: ok everyone open your books to were we stopped

the guy walks in

the guy: is this mrs.dutchersons class?

Mrs.d:oh hello! your maholo right?

Maholo: yes i am

Mrs.d:everyone this is moholoh,he just came to the states welcome him

a mix of hellos whats up and and a few grumpled sounds reeked from the class

maholo: thanks! where do i sit?

Teacher: Sit behinde to lilah james liah raise your hand

jake the populare prep. stands up

Jake:DUDE DONT SIT HIM BEHINDE THE GOTH GIRL SHE WILL CURSE HIM!!! hahahah!


Lilah: like he would much rather sit by a concieted ganster wannbe?

jake just stared her down and made and hissing noise as he sat down as the class giggled

Maholo: hi there

Lilah: buzz off hawain

maholo: wow what a nice hello in american

Lilah:(laughing) what do you want new boy?

Maholo: srry i didnt catch your name?

Lilah: its lilah,and your name is wait let me guess maholo

maholo and her laugh and it grew silent but he starts talking again

Maholo:wow such a pretty smile hidden behinde all that black makeup you shouldnt hide it so much!
Lilah: thanks, are you hitting on me?

Maholo: No,unless you want me to (laughs)

The bell rings and he says goodbye and she flips him off they laugh and he leaves..lilah starts thinking about that how someone actually went up to HER and started flirting she thought he was cute but didnt want to admit it because he was kind of preppy anyway she met up with anna at lunch and they talked about well prom lilah wanted to go but, didnt have a date to prom and wasnt surpised

Anna:wow lilah you look...well happy haha

Lilah: o stop i do not

Anna: no dont act like nothings wrong who is he?

Lilah:NO ONE ANNA gosh (blushing)

Anna:mmmhhhmmm,wait whos that walking over here

Lilah and Anna turn around to see maholo walking over to the table Lilah turns back around

Lilah: Oh Shit

Anna: Thats who it is!

Lilah: no no of course not

Maholo: is this seat takin?

Lilah/Anna: no

Anna: ive got to go you know do that thing over at the place bye lilah!

Lilah: ANNA!

maholo: ook then..so wats up?

Lilah: the ceiling!

Maholo: Very funny i mean how are you?

Lilah: im good!

Maholo: thats good! haha

the bell rang and lilah felt her heart flutter
she acctually had a crush..,6 months has passed by then her parents were back together but her dad is not yet recovered from his acoholism,also mohalo and lilah are colser together now then ever but not romatically she went to the mall dressed in her usual black clothes chains and crosses she was by herself and saw normal boys and girls flirting and kissing, thinking of maholo she imangins her new image she wont be quite preppy but pretty not dark next monday she straightened her hair dose her makeup and puts on a really cute outfit, wich was a white tank top with a blue jacket and a jean skirt and heads off to school. butterflys fill her stomach as if she was about to puke,her next class mrs.ds with maholo she walks in and jake starts to talk..

Jake: DAMNNNNNNN LILAH LOOKING GOOD

lilah giggles then blushes as she sits down in front of maholo maholo is stunned

Maholo: OMG LILAH YOU LOOK!..you look so pretty

Lilah: haha thanks hawiian!

moholo: could not stop staring at her then her teacher walks up

Mrs.d:we have assigned study budys of the day everyone! maholo work with lilah ok?

Maholo: no problem at all

Jake: ooh hes gonna get some tonight haha go maholo its ya birth..

Mrs.d: STOP JAKE!

Mrs.d went on teaching,lilah felt as though the day went on forever, but for once she felt happy in her own skin her and Maholo meet up later to study in her room for the study budy assignment

Maholo: wow!

Lilah:What is it??

Maholo: Sorry to repeat myself but you look gorgeous! you always have but know more then before

Lilah: i have to tell you somthing to tell you maholo..

Maholo: What is it lilah

Lilah: i like you more than a friend more like a boyfriend

Maholo: i feel the same about you

they both were quiet and they came close toghether and kiss, then make out she starts to remove her clothes as he dose he starts to kiss her neck he looks her in the eyes

Maholo: are you ready for this yet?

Lilah: yes!

their bodies get sweaty from lying on top of eachother he entered her body spiritually and phisically 45 minuets later they reached there climax and layed naked next to each other the door burst open

Father:(DRUNK)WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS YOU FUCKING SLUT JUST YOUR LIKE YOUR MOTHER!

they two teens are scared while her father pulls her out of bed and beats her maholo jumps up and puts his pants on before hitting frank to the ground...

Maholo grabs lilah as she puts her pants on and shirt and they run out of the door about a year after living with maholos parents maholo and lilah got a place of there own and lilah never thought about her past before maholo again!
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