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Rated: E · Poetry · Teen · #1229929
this is a poem that i wrote pleas give me feedback on things i need to work on thanks
you and i

i loved you like you were mine

you were always with some other guy

i was always there when you needed me

you always mistreated me

i told you i was there to care

you were more concerned about your hair

i now have popularity and better things to do

you now need me and lukily i still love and need you
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