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An exercise in scene description: please comments on how I can improve.
It was the most beautiful place she had ever seen.
The clearing sat silent, motionless, as if it had waited for eternity to finally be seen by human eyes. The trees surrounding it streamed gracefully up to the height of six men before exploding into a plethora of minty green leaves speckled with flowers of soft blues, pinks, and yellows. All over the ground grew leafy ferns with lavender and sunset-colored wildflowers. Even the ground below sparkled with unearthly beauty. The Sun gazed down from above onto the clearing, illuminating everything with a shimmering glitter.
In the distance, the quiet bubbling of a brook could be heard faintly. It took a few moments until she could breath again.
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