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1. The thief returned back to the scene of the crime. The thief returned to the scene of the crime. 2. The large giant was sleeping. The giant was sleeping. 3. The cold ice kept the drink cold. The ice kept the drink cold. 4. He passed his english class by a slender, narrow margin. He passed his English class by a narrow margin. 5. The final outcome of the study will help explain various different links between the three separate factors of heart disease, age, and physical activity. The outcome of the study will explain various links between heart disease, age, and physical activity. 6. My nephew was suspended from school because of his behavior and conduct in class. My nephew was suspended from school because of his behavior in class. 7. Nancy is wearing a blue colored dress that looks smaller in size than it should. Nancy is wearing a blue dress that looks smaller than it should. 8. Insofar as learning to play a musical instrument is concerned, the piano, in my personal opinion, would be in the category of the kind that is difficult to learn to play. Insofar as learning to play a musical instrument, the piano, in my opinion, would be in the category that is difficult to learn. 9. It is a fact that there are many individuals who do not vote in elections. There are many individuals who do not vote in elections. 10.The judge, who is a known expert in the field of labour discussions, recommended that each chairman of both sides meet with him tomorrow morning at 10am. The judge recommended that each chairman meet with him tomorrow at 10am. 11.Although they were few in number, the early settlers who came to America brought with them strong and loyal religious faith and beliefs. Although they were few in number, the early settlers brought with them strong religious beliefs. 12.The average worker who works in a surrounding environment that contains poisonous pollutants sometimes dies of a mortal illness connected with the pollutants. The average worker in a surrounding environment that contains poisonous pollutants sometimes dies of an illness connected with the pollutants. 13.He has a wide nose and a large head. He had a thick chest and stick legs. He was a big kid. He had a big head and a wide nose, as well as, a thick chest and stick legs. He was a kid. 14.“Hey Jimmy, hurry up! Linda shouted “It’s almost 2 pm, in the afternoon, and we have a lot of work to do." “Hey Jimmy, hurry up!” Linda shouted. “It’s almost 2 pm and we have a lot of work to do.” 15 The big, large book was eaten by the ugly, disgusting monster The large book was eaten by the disgusting monster. 16. The dog danced on its hind legs in a round circle and I thought it was a very unique trick. I thought it was a unique trick as I watched the dog dance on it hind legs in a circle. 17. After listening to the lecture Dan had a complete and total understanding of the subject. After listening to the lecture, Dan had a complete understanding of the subject. 18. Our teacher put us in groups and told us to cooperate together on the project. Our teacher put us in groups and told us to cooperate on the project. 19. Then our teacher told us that it was extremely crucial to finish the project by the deadline. Then our teacher told us it was crucial to finish by the deadline. 20. The group I'm in met in the Library to come up with a plan and scheme for the project. Our group met in the library to plan for the project. 21. In the event that a large-scale disaster such as a hurricane or earthquake occurred, the possibility exists that even large hospitals could be overwhelmed. In the event that a disaster occurred, it’s possible that even large hospitals could be overwhelmed. 22. Caught in a lie, Sam dropped down his head in shame. Caught in a lie, Sam dropped his head in shame. 23. One of my most trusted and respected personal friends who lives in the city of London at the moment is considering moving to Ireland because he has been offered a position in that area. One of my most trusted friends lives in London and is considering moving to Ireland because he has been offered a position there. 24. "Hey!" Tommy exclaimed. Tommy shouted, “Hey!” 25. My favorite part of the movie was when the building suddenly exploded. My favorite part of the movie was when the building exploded. 27. Jenny and Rick skated across the frozen ice holding hands together. Jenny and Rick skated across the ice holding hands. 28. Mr. Jones commutes by train back and forth to the city during the week. Mr. Jones commutes back and forth to the city during the week. 29. Lisa smiled and raised up from the chair. Lisa smiled and rose from the chair. 30. Joey ordered the parts and components for his car from Ebay. Joey ordered the parts for his car from Ebay. |
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