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Rated: 18+ · Poetry · Adult · #2064295
This is my first attempt at a Lipogram poem. I have only used one vowel. Feedback?
Velvet sheets preserve the scene
where they let themselves be free
Her reckless needs sent her there
to where he gently trembled

Renewed senses melted the energy
they felt repressed
He smelled her sweet essence
felt her dewy flesh

The merger left them speechless
yet refreshed new regrets
They remembered every excess
they felt every debt

Restlessness seemed lewd
perverse fed lechery
Self-respect tests them
where flesh sentences decency

The velvet sheets preserves the scene
where they let themselves be free
Sleepy eyes tempted the greed
they shared there relentlessly
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