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by Neissa
Rated: 18+ · Fiction · Horror/Scary · #699261
This part is a little more detailed and has more action. ch. 4-6
Chapter 4
Mysterious Phone Call

Neissa waited for a voice to answer. “ Hello!” Neissa repeated into the
phone only much louder now. She heard a faint screeching noise. She went to
hang up the receiver when a loud screaming came through the phone. She
recognized the scream as Andra’s. “ Andra? Andra is that you?” Neissa her
the scream continue. “ Andra!”
“ What’s the matter?” A voice said through the phone.
“ Nothing,” Neissa said. The voice showed it was a guy. “ Is that
Andra?”
“ Yes,” the voice continued. “ You sound worried. Don’t. Her pain will
soon end.”
“ What the hell are you talking about?” Neissa asked. “ If You kill her
I swear I’ll rip your fucking throat out! Now tell me what is happening!”
“ Don’t talk to me that way!” The sinister voice hissed. “ If you say one
more damn thing on the subject I swear I will make her death painful.”
“ She sounds like she’s in enough pain now!”
The screaming stopped suddenly. She heard a faint whisper but didn’t
hear what it actually said.
“ No. She’s fine now. No more pain. No more tears. No more Andra.”
Neissa heard the voice hang up the phone. Neissa was in shock still
holding the phone next to her ear. She was staring down her hunting knife.
She took the phone to her laptop. She broke the code on the private call
revealing the number. She traced it. The house it was traced to was 667 Gilli
Drive. It was a old warehouse owned by the people living in the house across
the street. 666 Gilli Drive. She knew that house sounded so familiar but she
just couldn’t place it.
She called up Thorn to find the answer.
“ Hello,” Thorn said.
“ Hi,” Neissa voice said. Anybody could hear the fear in her voice.
“ Neissa? What’s wrong?”
“ Do you know who lives at 666 Gilli Drive and the person who owns the
warehouse?”
“ That’s the house across from the warehouse right?”
“ Yeah. Who owns it?”
“ Seth. Seth Linkio.”
Neissa heart jumped. Had Seth done this to Andra? Thousands of
questions ran through her mind at once. She began to cry at the spot.
“ Neissa? What’s wrong? What happened?”
“ Are you sure that’s Seth? You’re not mistaken?”
“ Yeah, I’m sure. Why?”
“ Are you ready for this?”
“ What happened?”
“ I got a phone call. I traced it back to that house. Andra was there, I
heard her screams in the background. Their was a voice claiming he was
going to kill Andra. Then the screams stopped. I’m afraid! I don’t know what
to do.” Neissa let out a small cry. “ I couldn’t bare it if anything happened to
her! She was my best friend! I told her everything!” Neissa started crying.
Thorn’s voice dropped down almost to a whisper. “ Seth.” That was the
only thing he could say. His was froze in the moment and didn’t know what to
do.
“ What? Thorn tell me what’s happening! You know, don’t you! Tell me!”
Thorn kept quiet. “ Seth was always talking about Andra a lot!”
“ They were going out! Don’t you know anything?”
“ I know that!”
Neissa never heard Thorn raise his voice to her or anyone else. Neissa
was thinking of what to say. “ What secret do you know?”
“ Seth wasn’t normal, as you may know. He liked girls and everything
normal but....”
Neissa was waiting for an answer. “ But?”
“ He liked dead girls.”
“ Necrophiliac?”
“ Yeah. We need to get to the warehouse now!”
“ Okay! Met me at Call Street!”
“ Okay, but be careful!”
Neissa smiled. “ I will!” Then they both hung up the receiver.
Neissa told her parents she was going to Andra’s house. The thought
of Andra almost made her cry though. She hurried to the street. She heard
many noises on the way there but tried to ignore them. She forgot about
her fears when she saw Thorn. His slim body standing underneath the street
light. His light brown hair waving in the wind. Neissa has had a huge crush on
him since they met.
Neissa broke into a run until she was about three feet from the
street light. Her light green eyes met his bright blue eyes. Those eyes. They
were as blue as can be. She froze.
“ We have to hurry,” Thorn said. His voice sounding very sweet and
caring.
“ Okay,” Neissa agreed. “ Let’s go!”


Chapter 5
Haunted Warehouse

Neissa and Thorn walked through the cold streets. It was a wintry
night, though it was a summer. The temperature was down to about
twenty-five degrees Fahrenheit. Neissa shivered. Thorn walked completely
warm next to her. He blocked some of the wind hitting Neissa. He heard her
shivers and gently placed his arm around her. She smiled with satisfaction.
Her eyes lifted up to look at his face. Her eyes then quickly dropped to the
sign reading Gilli Drive. Her heart jumped for the fear of what may
happened, or what is going to happen. She tightly closed her eyes. Thorn
would guide her to the warehouse.
Neissa felt that he would think she’s weak if her eyes were shut. She
slightly opened them. Her eyes then shot open at the sight of a shadowy
figure in the distance. Neissa jumped right out of Thorn’s arms. Her heart
beginning to race. She looked over at Thorn. He was a good distance away
from her. Now the shadow was lurking behind him. She wanted to scream so
bad but she couldn’t. She opened her mouth but no sound emerged. Then the
figure went down the street. To the warehouse, Neissa was guessing.
Neissa breathed hard. “ Thorn!” She saw him fall on the hard
pavement. She ran up to his side and knelt down next to him. She put her
arms underneath him and lifted his head onto her lap. “ Thorn.” She
repeated softly. “ Don’t die on me!” She searched his body for any visible
wounds or blood. She didn’t find any she could see.
Thorn lay there, stiff and lifeless. His body was starting to become
cold. Neissa could feel the coldness from him. She quickly took her hoodie
and placed it on him. She felt his body slowly becoming warm. His eyes
seemed like they wanted to open. She smiled with relief. She pulled him over
to a patch of grass and laid him there.
Neissa gently kissed him. “ I’ll be back.” She whispered to the lifeless
body. “ I’ll be at the warehouse just in case you wake.” She kissed him once
more and left.
She walked down the frigid street. She read the house numbers
carefully. She stood in the middle of the street between 666 and 667 Gilli
Drive. To her surprise, it was a vacant lot. No houses. The frosty air blew
through her hair. She began to walk again but she failed when she tripped.
She landed on her hands and knees. She grunted at the mistake. She felt
silly for tripping on such a small rock. She brushed off her pants. She
noticed something red. Blood? She looked at her hands, they were covered
in blood. On the street there was a small puddle of blood. She heard a
non-stop dripping sound of blood. She looked up at the tree. There hanging
from her neck was Andra. Neissa let out a long, loud scream. She kept her
stare on Andra.
She felt as though a pair of eye were suddenly staring at her back.
She turned around to confront the person. In the dark she saw the shadow
lurking again. She looked back to where Thorn was laying. She didn’t see him
there. She rushed to the spot. Thorn was laying there but now there was
signs of wounds and blood. She turned around to find a car or phone. She
was shocked when she saw the warehouse. The door slowly creep open as if
it was inviting them in. She took the chance and grabbed Thorn. They
entered the warehouse slowly with the door slamming behind their backs.

Chapter 6
Encounter with Seth

Neissa almost immediately felt she had made the wrong choice. She
looked down at Thorn. She couldn’t help but cry at the sight of him lying
there lifeless. He was her best friend and she didn’t know if he was dead or
in a coma. She scanned the room for anybody who might be watching her.
After seeing nobody was there she bent over and kissed him.
“ I though you didn’t have a boyfriend,” Keith’s voice echoed.
Neissa quickly raised her head. She looked Keith straight in the eye.
“ I don’t.” She said very angrily. “ He’s my best friend!” A reddish glow set
into her normal color eyes.
Keith grinned. “ I see my spawn is working.” He continued to smile.
“ What spawn?” Neissa asked Keith. “ What did you do to me?”
“ If I tell you,” Keith started, “ It wouldn’t be a surprise anymore on
what happens.”
“ What are you going to do?” Neissa was slightly worried. She hoped
nothing would happen to Thorn.
Keith smiled at the worry in her voice. He walked up to the lifeless
body of Thorn. Keith went to touch him but Neissa moved him back out of
Keith’s grasp. Keith continued to scan the two. “ I though you were going to
be my girlfriend?”
“ In your dreams!” Neissa hissed. “ I would never do that even if my
life depended on it!” Neissa paused for a minute to think of what to say. She
thought of what he had said about the spawn. “ Unless, you tell me what the
spawn is.”
Keith looked as though he was considering the offer. “ I’ll have to ask
my son what kind of person you are. I want to see how good you are before I
consider that.”
“ Son?” Neissa thought out loud. “ You have a son?”
“ Two,” Keith added. Keith eyes dropped down to Thorn. “ Thorn is one
and my other is Seth.”
“ Seth?” Neissa said. “ Thorn? Are you completely sure?”
“ Yeah,” Keith said. “ Seth is out with Andra now.”
Neissa was wondering what he meant by that. “ Andra is dead.” She
searched in her mind for an answer. She remember the phone conversation
with Thorn. Seth was a Necrophiliac.
“ Seth killed Andra so he could have her all to himself,” Keith
remarked. He let out a small laugh.
“ You freak!” Neissa said. “ I know Seth could be your son but never
Thorn! Thorn is too nice! He my best friend, so he couldn’t be related to a
monster like you!” Neissa throat ached from the screaming.
“ I’ll make you a deal,” Keith said. “ I will tell you about the spawn and
maybe, just maybe, retract it. Also I will let Thorn have a free life if you...”
Keith paused for a moment. “ You fight Seth and win. If you lose though,
Thorn will belong to me forever.”
Neissa looked at Keith then down to Thorn. “ Sure.” She wasn’t
completely confident in that but she would try her best to win. She wanted
to free Thorn from Keith. She really didn’t care much about the spawn.
Keith looked deep into Neissa’s eyes. “ I will give you one day to
prepare. I will revive Thorn so he can be with you.” Keith raised his arms.
Between his hands was a glowing blue ball. He dropped it into Thorn and then
Keith snapped his fingers and they were in Neissa’s room.
Neissa looked at Thorn laying on the bed sleeping. Keith had cheated
her out of time. It was seven o’ clock the next night. She silently cursed at
him. She looked back at Thorn and smiled. She thought he looked so cute
when he slept. He wasn’t awake to see the huge smile on her face. She
wanted so bad just to wake him up and kiss him.
She gently placed her hand on his shoulder. His body was warm. She
gently shook him to try to get him to wake. His eyes sensitively opened and
he winced at the intense light. He studied Neissa expression and skimmed
his eyes over her room.
“ Hi,” Neissa said softly.
“ Hey,” Thorn said. Gradually he put himself in a sitting position. He
stretched out like a cat. He put his lips against Neissa’s and softly kissed
her. He say a huge smile on Neissa face and that made him smile. “ This is
your room?”
“ Yeah,” Neissa said. She surveyed the walls. She looked over to Thorn
who seemed very interested in the room. “ The walls are actually black but
with all these posters you really can’t tell.”
“ Same here,” Thorn said lazily. “ What happened? All I remember is
you jumping away from me.”
“ It’s an extremely long story,” Neissa sighed. “ I will tell you later, I
promise. I have a question though.”
“ Yeah?” Thorn said.
“ Are you Keith’s son?” Neissa blurted out. “ Is Seth your brother?”
“ Yes,” Thorn said. “ Can we please not talk about this now?”
“ If you promise to tell me everything later?” Neissa compromised.
“ Sure,” Thorn said. He looked into Neissa eyes. He leaned forward
and kissed her. When he pulled back he blushed. He whispered, “ I love you,”
into her ear.
“ I love you, too,” She replied back. She kissed him once more. Then
Neissa situated herself on her bed and Thorn on the floor. They went to
sleep moments afterwards.

Neissa awake seeing Thorn next to her on the bed. The room was
chilly but his body kept her warm. She snuggled against his body. He must of
placed himself up here during the night, Neissa thought. She let a small tear
drop. What if I lose him. Oh God please help me! Neissa was shocked at the
last words she said. She was Atheist, which meant she didn’t believe in God.
What made her say that? Many question were running through her mind. So
many that she got confused and a bit dizzy.
She was ready to fight the battle. She got up and stretched. She
looked back to see that Thorn was finally waking. She bent over and kissed
him. She shooed him out if the room since she had to get dressed. She
searched though her dresser trying to find something comfortable. She
decided just to put on jeans and a tank top. It didn’t really matter.
She walked out and saw Thorn patiently waiting for food. She hit him
gently on the head and called him a pig. While she was cooking she told him
about the whole evening and the fight she had gotten herself into. He
begged her not to fight Seth. She refused to listen to him and said it was
her choice and she was going to fulfill it. She just kissed him gently and told
him just to wish her luck.
They slowly walked to the Warehouse. Neissa heart beating faster
with each step she took. Thorn looked like he wanted to pull Neissa back and
kiss her and beg her more not to do this. They walked up the front entrance.
They hesitated for a moment, they really didn’t want to enter but Thorn’s
free life depended on it. Neissa pushed the door open expecting to be
attacked immediately but she saw Seth waiting patiently for her arrival.
Seth jumped off of the crate he was previously sitting on. His blonde
hair looked black in the darkness. His eyes cold and gray probed Neissa’s. He
looked over at Thorn. The expression on his face shoed much hatred toward
him. “ Are you ready?”
Neissa looked at him. The only way she saw him is because of his pure
white skin. “ Yeah,” She said. “ No weapons though!”
Seth agreed and began to attack. Neissa managed to dodged his kicks
and punches. She did a back flip to avoid a board he picked up. She had said
no weapons but he had ignored that fact. She hissed at him in hatred. She
threw herself forward and delivered a hard blow to his stomach. He fell
back in pain and Neissa laughed. Then she felt a whip hit her back. She
screeched in pain. She looked over her shoulder and saw Keith standing at
the side line hitting her. Repeatedly over and over again he hit her. Blood
oozed from her back. She could barely stand. He had hit her so quickly she
hadn’t had a chance to move. That distraction gave Seth enough time to
recover and pounce on Neissa. He sent her hitting the floor hard.
Lying on her back sent jolts of pain through her body. She tried to
roll on her side but it didn’t help very much. Seth would only kick her back to
her original position. She could barely keep her eyes open. She saw Seth
reach back into his pocket and revealed a dagger. He pushed it against her
throat. If she tried to move it would slice her throat and kill her instantly.
“ You have any last words?” Seth asked. “ Before you die?”

Chapter 7
Taren’s Breakthrough

Taren sat in the kitchen, she was making tea. She stared blankly into
the crystal glass. There was an odd silence throughout the house. Her
parents were out to some fancy dinner and she was in paradise. She grabbed
the tea and walked into her room. The carpet felt good against her bare
feet. She signed on to Buffy Chat and began to talk to Matt.
Matt started dropping all these hints that he was going to dump her
but Taren just ignored them. Finally he actually did it. She felt tears come
to her eyes and signed on under a different screen name. She soon met a guy
named Will. She started talking to him and they became fast friends and
even a couple. He lived some odd miles away from her. Her was nineteen and
sadly she was fifteen. It really didn’t matter to them, they believed they
were in love. How can you fall in love with someone you never met? They
believed they did.
It was around midnight before they got off. Taren took a vow not to
tell Neissa, she would just bite her head off. She knew Neissa didn’t believe
in Internet relationships. She was too happy to go to sleep that night. She
stayed up and decided to do dishes, just to get on her parents good side. For
once in her life. She pranced into the kitchen and turned on the water. She
jumped back to see that it wasn’t water, it was blood. She went to turn off
the facet but it wouldn’t. The blood overflowed and spilled out onto the
floor. Freaked but the incident she went to run and stay away from kitchen.
When she turned around though, a zombie of Mr. Lopinio was there.
She ran up to him to see if a punch would hurt him. It didn’t though.
He looked down to where she punched him and to her. He began to walk
towards her. She walked backwards until she hit the wall.
“ What do you want?” She said.
He ignored what she was trying to say and continued to walk forward.
She decided there was no way to escape so she let her defenses down. She
waited for him to attack you and rip her body clean of her flesh. After
about a minute of being alive, she opened her eyes to find he wasn’t there.
She took a deep breath. Was the just a hallucination? Taren thought.
She returned her mind to the blood in the sink. She went to drain it.
As she put her hand in the blood, in the window she saw the reflection of
Mr. Lopinio. She felt his cold have caress her. She shivered. His other cold
hand brought a blade to her throat. She stood there, helpless.
Mr. Lopinio whispered in her ear, “ You, Karen, Raven and Neissa have
two weeks.” He voice was intense.
“ Two weeks for what?” Taren spat. She meant it to be a question but
came out more sarcastic than she needed right now.
“ To solve the puzzle of the Four Chosen Ones,” He whispered in her
ear. With a cloud of red smoke, he was gone.
Taren grasped her throat. It pained from where the blade. What and
who the Hell are the Four Chosen Ones? Taren asked herself. Taren looked
down at the sink then to the floor. The blood was gone. This is way too much
for my small mind to handle right now.
Taren walked to her room and swiftly hit the keys on the keyboard.
She found tons of matched for the Four Chosen Ones but she had no clue
which one she was looking for. She heard a faint sound of the phone ringing.
She didn’t want to answer it for fear of what may be on the other end. She
got very annoyed after the phone rang about fifteen times. Then she picked
up the phone and screamed.
“ What the hell is your problem?” The voice asked.
“ Karen?” Taren said with relief. “ I thought you were someone else.”
“ Who else could I be?”
“ Mr. Lopinio.”
“ He’s dead!”
“ A zombie!”
“ Taren, what the hell are you saying?”
“ He came to my house. He told me we had two weeks to solve the
puzzle of the Four Chosen Ones. I know this sounds hallucinatory but her
was here.”
“ What do you mean by we?”
“ You, Raven, Neissa and me.”
“ Wow in that case I better watch out he might come for me next!
Maybe he’ll came back to you and tell you more!” Karen’s voice had a hint of
sarcasm in it.
“ Stop acting like a bitch and listen for once! Put aside the fact that
your life is shit!”
“ Whatever.”
“ Ditto. I have one question though? Have you ever once talk to Neissa
or Raven since school ended?”
“ I talk to Raven. She’s quad camping all this month. Neissa I could
really care less about.”
“ You selfish little slut!”
Taren hung up on her. She hissed in anger. Why does Karen have to be
some hard to get along with anymore? Taren thought.
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