I... I'm nervious... Deep breaths... Ok. I'm a young writer (real young!) I've shared some work with some friends and they say it's good. The problem is that I'm not so sure. They all say I'm too hard on myself, but I... Well I need someone who isn't my friend to tell me my writing is decent. So, if you have time, could you read my story and review it for me? It would mean a lot to me. Thank you.