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I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
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Review of Sovereign  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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An interesting short story. You have what looks to be a Post-Battle situation, where, after the battle has been done, the surviving fighters are reflecting upon what they did, and are even unsure of themselves. The one offers their support to the other, to try to help them. Interesting. Wouldn't mind knowing more.

Characters
Wouldn't mind knowing more, but I understand how these Short Story contests go.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of The Sacrifice  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First up - wow. You have a young woman dealing with issues. At the same time, a young man tries to help her through them. The young man gives up a lot, just to see to it that she makes it through the day. Very interesting.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
What a coincidence - I happen to have this same image in my portfolio - different text, but still - nice to have a chance to look at the other one after soo many years. *Laugh*

(In fact, for those of you reading this review out there, me and Megan both placed bids on this image during an auction in October 2012 (if my date's correct), and I think we tried to outbid the other, until she bought it outright. Still, she was nice enough to buy a copy for me.)

Then again, when one shares similar tastes, it's not unheard of for a good bidding war to occur. *BigSmile*

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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It seems that a werewolf has started its attack. Mysterious FBI agents are destroying evidence. The one agent is injured, and something very strange is happening to him. Will anyone make it through the night? Only time will tell.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
There are a few sections that need fixing.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Things get more and more mysterious, as legends are told about creatures from various cultures being seemingly related, and then some really strange agents end up appearing in the area, and they don't seem to be all that friendly.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
You have a few minor issues that could be taken care of.

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131
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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A young man is trying to figure out how to live with himself after the death of his brother, and discovers something strange.

Meanwhile, the local sheriff is searching for a possible survivor, and has to handle a paranoid local.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting item. You have a young man who wore a kilt as part of his National Heritage, but gets in trouble at school as a result. Parents show the school the rule that allows him to wear the outfit. School changes the rule. Boys protest, and start wearing dresses - I wonder how the rest is going to end.

Characters
Could use some more description, but since this was written as a news artical, I can understand.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Getting ready  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A nice little poem to read. You have someone getting ready for their date, always looking at the clock. Sounds like someone is nervous to me. Sometimes the first event isn't easy. Afterwards, who knows?

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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This seems to be a short story about an aging woman thinking of lost opportunities, and about a lost love from when she was younger. It seems that four-leave clovers held a special meaning for the two of them. Kind of cute.

Characters
Not much description given.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestion
You mentioned something about a half-breed, but it wasn't clear to me that the other person was of another race or some such thing.

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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Things keep on getting more and more mysterious as our FBI agent investigates the murders further. He soon finds out than a lot of things are not as they seem. Things have taken a turn for the strange indeed.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
There are some areas you might want to work on.

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Review of Virtue  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Nice poem, talking about the different virtues, and the little poems seem to fit each one rather nicely. It seems to be a companion to another poem, which I might have to check out.

Thoughts
A nice poem to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Wonderland  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I heard it was your birthday, so I'm going to give a review or two. Enjoy.

Interesting little take on the whole Alice in Wonderland's Rabbit hole. It seems to have taken a dark turn on the way down. Makes one wonder a bit.

Thoughts
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Blessed Acorns  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Well, an interesting story. You have a young man trying to get to the hospital, because it seems that a family member is there. Also, it seems that they are bringing some acorns that came from a church yard. Then things take a turn for the weird.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Questions
Is there a part 2 to this?

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Well, this is an interesting section of the story. The FBI agent is searching the latest crime scene, and is trying to take evidence. Meanwhile, it seems that another man seems to think that the FBI agent isn't whom he claims to be.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
There are a few sentences where the boy is speaking but the first word isn't capitalized. Of course, this could be an indication of mumbling.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Well, this is a nice item to read. You describe what goes on during one of the Holiday events that your church does around this time of the year. You talk about the different things that happen, and some of your own personal experiences that you've been through. Very nice.

Thoughts
Very interesting to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Thanksgiving - always a fun time trying to arrange things, even if the place you are going to isn't even twenty miles away, because of other things. Especially when you lack a car yourself. One sibling is coming up from 200+ miles to the South, another is out deer hunting, and everyone else is busy. Finally, things come together, see your grandma, dad, and over a dozen relatives you only see three times a year. Then the dog grabs the bird and you have to chase after it outside because someone opened the door at the wrong time! (Okay, that one never happened, that I know of.) Still, always fun.


Characters
Would like to hear more about your family.

Spelling and grammar
I don't see any issues.

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Well, things just get stranger and stranger. You have a boyfriend/girlfriend couple, along with a bus filled with highschool football players, have an encounter with the creature. Something is happening to the F.B.I. Agent, and only God knows what's going to happen next.

Characters
Interesting so far.

Spelling and Grammar
There are some areas to work on.

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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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This is starting to get interesting. Your F.B.I. agent finding a lot of twists and turns to this mystery he's investigating, and it seems there's something else going on, but he doesn't know what's going on.

Characters
They are interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
There are some sections you could work on.

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Well, things keep on getting more and more interesting as our F.B.I. agent meets new faces, including a member of the local Scooby-Doo gang, and some rather mysterious people, and hears a very strange story, that may or may not relate to the case he's on.

Characters
You have some more.

Spelling and Grammar
You have a few sections that you could do some work on.

Thoughts
Can't wait to see the rest of this story.

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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I've read the prior two chapters, and things get more interesting. It seems that this isn't the first time someone has disappeared in this town. Also, our F.B.I. agent is trying to deal with the loss of his partner. Looks good.

Characters
You have a few more new ones, who look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
You have some areas where you might want to take a second look at.

Question
What happened the other times someone disappeared?

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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Well, this is an interesting start to a story. First up you have a young man and his father trying to figure out what has been stealing their livestock. Next you have a federal agent dealing with the aftermath of an investigation. Looks good so far.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
There are a number of misspellings and grammar errors that could be fixed. You also have some sections where the firearms are switched for another - rifle to shotgun for instance.

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Well, this looks like the start of an interesting story. You have a young man who seems to be having a lot of trouble in school. He meets up with a young woman, who has a very jealous boyfriend. However, it seems that bad things are to happen to the young man.

Characters
The characters seem to be interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
Near the end, there is a minor issue where it looks like you hit "Enter" without actually starting a new paragraph.

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Review of Fire Jazz  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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You have a nice little poem here, which, unless I'm mistaken, is about a fire at some sort of performance. Or, is the fire being a reference to someone's passions? In any case, let's hope the fire brigade shows up soon.

Thoughts
Interesting metaphors.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Well, this is an interesting story. You have a young man meeting up with a mermaid. However, it seems that the mermaid's lake is cursed, as it were, for the members of the man's tribe, because of what a long dead seer has said. Things become more interesting when the young man's mother finds out.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Well, this is an interesting story. You have a strange house, which everyone regards as unusual, but then they walk away. That is, until one man decides to take a look inside, and check the place out, only to finds something strange.

Characters
Could use better description.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling and grammar.

Question
Who is the girl in the paintings?

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