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2,483 Public Reviews Given
2,645 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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Review of My Heart  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a Review you Requested. Enjoy!

You have a short, and cute, little poem. Seems that many years prior, someone had encountered another. As a result, the love between them began to grow, and blossom. It is certainly something worth chuckling over, as it makes one think of their own loves over the years.

Thoughts
Makes one think of the loves they've had over the years.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Curse Unravel  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh, this is a cute story. You have a woman going to meet the love of her life. She wants to be with them. However, it seems that their love has a secret so scary, they are afraid that it might drive her away. Will love be enough to allow these two to be as one? Only time will tell, and perhaps, maybe, love will be more than enough.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
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Review of Crabby Dash  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a cute little poem about crabs racing. They must get to the ocean, and they all rush to reach it. Some just dash, and other sneak. Some even get scared. Oh, who will win? Who will make it? Who won't? Plenty of questions to be asked, as these crabs race one. Very cute.

Thoughts
I have to say, pretty cute to look at. Makes one think of a few vacations.

Spelling and Grammar
I do not see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
People grow old - this is a fact. This fact includes Heroes. So, what happens when a group of Heroes tries to raise the next generation, in an attempt to prevent a bad future from happening? What happens when now-adult mutants must raise new, and younger, mutants? How will they navigate around those who spread anti-mutant information? Come and find out.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any real issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In an unknown future, mutant animals rule, and humans are lucky to be classified as pets. In a strange twist of fate, a small group of unlikely people are sent back to the Early 21st century, just before disaster strikes the human race. Encountering the likes of Batman and the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles, will this group be able to save the human race, or will they be the ones to condemn it? Only time will know the answer.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see many issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
What do a mutant roadrunner, a mutant king cobra, and a soldier recovering from a mission-gone-wrong have in common? On the surface, not much. However, fate has determined that these three unlikely people are needed to save a world. Will they be able to work together to help save this land? Only time will tell.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
An interesting interactive. In a town secretly full of werewolves, things are about to get interesting when a new family moves in. Watch as the fur flies when the truth is revealed. Can these new arrivals keep things secret, or will there need to be things done when the moon rises? Only time will tell.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Welcome to Terratus. Live life as a human, elf, dwarf, anthron, or a monster. How will you live? Are you an average person? Are you a mercenary? Are you a slave? Are you just a traveler? Are you a warrior? Is there peace in the land, or is there war? Let's find out what happens together, as we travel these lands of fantasy.

Characters
Characters are interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see many issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Life is not easy, when you're a young man in a world filled with monsters. Especially since, most want to eat you. Follow James, as he tries to survive in this world. Will he make it to old age, or will he end up in a monster's gut? Or, will something else happen to him? Perhaps you'll take a chance, and add to it yourself. Will you help James, or condemn him? It's your choice.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any serious issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of I, Anthro 2157  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
At some point in the future, WW3 has occurred. Animal-looking androids as a norm. Seen as servants and laborers, they do jobs many do not want to do. These androids have built-in rules. How do they affect the world around them? That's something worth finding out.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any real issue with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Respawn!  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
When one lives in a world, where humans are on the bottom of the food chain, having the ability to come back could be seen as a blessing. Or, perhaps, it's more of a curse. One young man, after a date with a werewolf - where he turned out to be the mid-movie snack - has discovered that he has the ability to just wake up in bed afterwards. How will this ability help him out?

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Disney City  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this looks like a cute interactive. A kid has to movie to a new city. Much to their surprise, it's full of characters from animated Disney movies and TV shows. Makes one wonder what their life will be like now? Looks kind of cute, and I hope that folks will add to it.

Characters
Characters look interesting so far.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling and Grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Ah, the classic Noir - Damsel in need of help, in order to get justice. A Detective or two, in need of a job that would pay. Fedoras, trench coats, and rain. Soft blues playing from a saxophone. More rain. Prohibition-type vibes. Yep - classic Noir, with anthros.

Follow the trail, as two detectives seek out the one who murdered their latest client's husband. Nothing quite like tangling with those from the Underworld to get their blood flowing.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
After a video game tournament, two players are summoned to the Video Game world, in order to save it from an evil force. Journey through a number of video game landscapes, as they do battle with a number of villains, including Dracula, among others. Time for some fun.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Monstrossica  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Inspired by Jumanji. A group of friends find a mysterious board game. Whenever they make a roll, some sort of monster shows up, causing strange things to happen to the players. Can the friends make it to the end before monsters control everything? Read, and find out.

Characters
The characters are interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any real issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Haunted castle, filled with legendary treasures, and it shows up one night every hundred years. All in a night's work for a trio of adventurers, or so they think, when they enter the place. However, they soon discover that they, and others, are trapped inside the place. Will they find a way out?

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Mythic Park  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Do you dream of unicorns and werewolves? Do you wish that they were real? They are.

Come, to Mythic Park, where creatures thought to be myths are real. Make your dreams, a reality and..... Fight for your life when things go wrong.

A lawyer, a Big Game Hunter, a Cryptozoologist, a Professor, all go to an island filled with legendary creatures. Problems soon occur, and now, they, and their host, and the host's grandchildren, are in a desperate fight for their lives, once the creatures get loose.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
There's a few spots that could be worked on, but no real issues otherwise.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In the pattern of "Ready, Player One", a group of players compete in a game for a prize. However, due to issues beyond their control, more is now at stake, forcing the players to work together, just to survive. Will they be able to make it out alive? Only time will tell.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hold the horses, and rustle up some grub, as you settle on down for this tale. A group of outlaws robbed a train, with a special treasure. A Federal Marshal heads off after them, aided by a well-known Bounty Hunter. There's gold, ripe for the taking, to be had, in this yarn. So, come, and listen to this tale.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
There's a few spots where the spelling could be neater.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Would you like to see some cute little dragons? Well, right here is where a bunch of them are. See what ones are around, their current levels, and who owns them. Perhaps, if you too wish to be a dragon tamer, one of them could potentially be yours. Plenty of fun.

Thoughts
Looks interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Terror on Titan  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
In Homage of the Sci-Fi film known as Alien, crewmembers of a space ship pick up a strange egg-like object, only for it to hatch. Now, it's a fight for survival, as the crewmembers try to track down and kill the creature. Will any of them survive? Come, and find out.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
There's a few spots where the spelling could be fixed, but otherwise, alright.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, this looks like a fun activity. Follow the trail on your way through the fairy kingdom, where there's sights to be had, and prizes to be won. The more one journeys, the more one gets to see. What could the ultimate prize be? Why don't you come, and find out?

Thoughts
Looks like a fun activity.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Inglorious Humans  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Evil has overtaken the world. A group of monsters sets to reduce humans to little more than cattle. However, there is a group, one that seeks to end this. They plan to make monsters fear them, and they will not be nice to those they catch. Join the Inglorious Humans, as watch as they seek to put an end to the evil forces in charge.

Characters
The characters are interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Death stinks. Even more so when you weren't supposed to die. However, it happens. Luckily, in this case, a young man gets a second - or, actually, a third - chance when he dies too early. However, this is not without it's drawbacks - for he ends up inhabiting the body of another young man, in a world filled with werewolves, with a werewolf lover. Will he survive this new chance on life, or will he be found out? Come on in, and read.

Characters
The characters are interesting, but the names make me laugh. If a certain one pops up as a character that I didn't make, I'll explain the joke.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of WDC Dragon Vale  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh, this looks like a fun activity. Adopt a dragon. Pick your color. Pick your stats. After that, let's see just how crazy things can get, as you try to tame a dragon. What will happen, as your dragon grows up? Will it remain a friend, or will it become a foe? What will you do?

Thoughts
Looks like a fun activity.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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