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Review Style
I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is a Review Request.

Well, this looks like the start of a very interesting story. You have an Inspired-Writer-To-Be trying to research material for a book, specifically the part of a chef, but it seems that most of the locals don't want to hire out their chefs for research. However, fate has a funny sense of humor when he gets a job at a restaurant, only to find an alien from outer space at the place.

Characters
The three characters are interesting, but they could use some description- like hair color and such.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of NIRIAN  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a Review Request that you asked me to do. Enjoy{/i}

Well, this is an interesting story. You have a young woman, who seems to have the unique ability to teleport herself to another location. However, it seems that this ability comes with a price, as the local police/military forces are hunting for her, because of her ability.

Characters
So far, your characters are very interesting. I wonder what developments will occure to them.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
I think that you might want to remove the big question marks, as they serve to dstract, instead of showing that time has passed.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, this is a nice little item to find. It tells what the site's doing for its birthday, and who all's celebrating. It's always good to get into the spirit of things, because it's at this time of year that practically everyone, who can, is hosting contests, auctions, raffles, and just plainly giving out Gifts of Gift Points, Awardicons, Merit Badges, perhaps some Memberships, and a whole host of other things. One has to love this time of year, especially on this site.

Originality
I doubt I'll see many items like this, especially for the whole site.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Happy (Number of Years) Birthday!

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Weekly Goals  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Now this is a fun little place. This Forum is set up for people to write their goals in, be it to write so many reviews, make so many additions to a book, or interactive, or even more personal goals, like buying a diamond ring for a certain girl, or filling in the thousand and one potholes in the driveway. In any case, be nice and descriptive about your goals, and you're practically guarantied a prize of 1000GPs on Monday when you tell your goal, and another 1KGPs when you come back on Friday to say how well you did.

Originality
I've never seen another forum quite like this.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Best of luck with this Forum. May many people tell you their goals, and may many be successful at them.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Deserted island  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is your Fifth and Final Review from "Invalid Item" . Enjoy.

A mall group of friends decide to vacation on a remote and deserted island. They spend their time fishing and enjoying the campfire. Then they turn on one of their radios, and the news isn't good.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is your Forth of Five reviews from "Invalid Item" . Enjoy.

Well, this is a cute little item. Admittedly, it's a little outdated, but I have to admire how you'd handle things; Hawaiian shirts, Bar-BQs and Macarena dances. *Laugh* *Bigsmile* A real hoot.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is your Third of Five reviews from "Invalid Item" . Enjoy.

A group of girls set up a detective agency in the form of a lemonade stand. Their job; find a missing stuffed teddy bear. They question all who come by, and something is discovered along the way.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is your Second of Five reviews from "Invalid Item" . Enjoy.

This is about a woman from an island in the Pacific. In order to marry the man she loves, she goes to the New World (California) to buy some medicinal items. While there, she sees many strange and wonderful things.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is your First of Five reviews ordered by a friend from "Invalid Item" . Enjoy.

Well, this is an interesting remake of Hansel and Gretel. A boy and his sister go into the woods and end up encountering an alien that wants their life force. Thank goodness for sunflower seeds. *Laugh* *Bigsmile*

Characters
Kids will be kids.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling and grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of new life  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is your Fifth and Final review from "Invalid Item" . Enjoy.

Sometimes we have to sit down, and enjoy life. One must take the time, and perhaps watch a cicada emerge from hiding. Nothing quite like it.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling and grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Interesting little story. A young catgirl and her friends go to a dance, where they find the girl's elderly grandfather. The elder encourages her to go and have fun, that there'd be time to talk later. However, time seems to have ended for the grandfather, as tragedy occurs.

Characters
You could describe them better, for those who don't follow your stories.

Spelling and Grammar
Some commas could be used when describing the girl's friends.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Draco's story  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
This is a Review you Requested from me.

You have what looks to be the start of an interesting interactive. You have a young man, who has these great powers, being placed into one battle after another. He seems to have some friends/allies who help out during this quest. I hope to see more people add to it.

Characters
Sometimes less is more. More often than not, a brief description of a person can go a long way- For instance, if you have a wolf character, you can mention the color of their fur, and if they have a scar over their eye, but don't say who put the scar there until an appropriate point in the story.

Spelling and Grammar
There are areas that could use improvement. Having spaces for paragraphs can help, and break up big blocks of text.

Other Suggestions
I'd add this to the Genres Fantasy and Fanfiction, if this is based off of a game/TV series.

Work on these areas, and perhaps I'll give this item a re-review.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Nightmare  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is your February entry to my contest, "Invalid Item" . However, since this is a poem, and not a short story, it has been disqualified, but you still get a review.

This an interesting little poem. A man dreams that he's married to a woman, but a monster tries to keep them apart at night.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
Next time you enter this contest, enter a story instead of a poem.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is your February entry to my contest, "Invalid Item" . Enjoy.

A man keeps having strange dreams at night. One where he hears a train, and a woman calling for someone. One has to wonder who the woman is, some ghost perhaps, or something else all together.

Characters
Very interesting, but there could be some clarification as to what was going on with the three men with shovels.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
You might want some space between paragraphs.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Down at the Inn  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is your February Entry to my Medieval contest, "Invalid Item" . Enjoy.

This is an interesting item. It's basically a retelling of the movie Psycho. People enter a strange inn, and disappear, including a woman with 40,000 in gold of the King's money. Eventually, an official, and the woman's lover, and her sister, decide to check the place out.

Characters
Very interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of THE MARCH  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Well, this is an interesting little item to find in a Random Review. It seems to be about the messengers of the Future and Hope. Of course, I wonder if there's actually hope here in this poem, as it talks about people being blind, and that there seems to be bloodshed of some sort. One has to wonder.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Well, this is an interesting item to find with the Random Review thing. At first glance, it seems like a rant about ones' thoughts and feelings about some Japanese anime. However, on second glance, it looks more like some issues with other things, like family and religion. I have to wonder what's the point of this- I mean, sometimes there's topics that confuse me, and I'll admit that I go off on tangents at times, but by and large, I try to stay on topic.

Topic
I think that you need to make the subject clear; Is this piece about a show, your wife, or church?

Spelling and Grammar
You have plenty of lowercase "i"s that need to be capitalized.

Suggestions
You might want to make this 13+, as you have some mild swearing.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is your First of Five reviews that you won for your participation in "Invalid Item" . Enjoy.

This is a nice poem. It seems that when it comes to writing, things are much like a hunt- one has to track down the subject, research it, and finally, take care of it, but the question is how.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
First up, I'd like to congratulate you on being the first person to enter my contest, "Invalid Item" . Enjoy your review, and may you have some competition in a future round.

A knight is watching over a bunch of sheep, clay ones enchanted with Jewish magic, and wishes that he had flesh and blood ones- but real animals have been hard to come by since a sickness killed many. He then hear about some golems that managed to escape from the salt mines, and the reward on them is enough to buy some real sheep.

However, as he tracks them down, he starts to uncover some unsettling truths, including the fact that he himself might be a golem as well.

Character
Nicely done.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Comparisons with Original
A nice retelling of Blade Runner, as well as the story it was based off of.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is your Fifth and Final review for your participation in "Save My Membership Auction - Closed" . Enjoy.

When a large snake is stolen, a woman tries to find out who did the deed, even when people believe that the snake had escaped or that the owner was trying to collect insurance money. Will she be able to track down this cold-blooded reptile, or will she wind up as snake food?

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
In the last line, you might want to make "Reader" "Readers".

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is your Second of Five reviews for your participation in "Save My Membership Auction - Closed" . Enjoy.

Canned hunting is something that just angers me. I come from a long line of farmers, and hunters, who have to work for a living just to put food on the table. As it is, filling out deer tags and bagging a good sized deer to get a hundred pounds of venison tends to be cheaper than buying a hundred pounds of beef, and if you get a good sized buck, you've got a trophy to go with the hunt.

Now, I could understand if one was a farmer in Africa or Asia and the lion/tiger was threatening the livestock/village- one has a right to protect their family/livelihood- but to just get some old creature from the zoo and kill it, that's just like murder.

Spelling and Grammar
You have some areas that need capital letters and spacing between words.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is your First of Five Reviews for your participation in "Save My Membership Auction - Closed" . Enjoy.

Well, this sure is interesting. This is from when you was an animal control officer back in 1986, and you had to respond to a call involving a gator blocking up traffic. By the sounds of things, you were sure crazy in how you apprehended the 20-foot gator with little more than a long stick and a length of rope. *Laugh* *Bigsmile*

Characters
Sounds like those boys sure don't like critters.

Spelling and Grammar
There are some areas that need capital letters.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is your Third of Four reviews gifted to you for your friend's participation in "Invalid Item" . Enjoy.

This in a nice folder you have, which contains the images that you're using for your C-Note shop- it's always nice to be able to give things. Very nice to look at.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
You might want to post a link to your shop here- it would make things easier for potential buyers.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an interesting review forum. One can come here and post requests for items, without the worry of limitations or restrictions, and the owner of the forum will come an give the item/items a review. Highly useful for many situations, like when you have multiple GC items.

Originality
This is the first forum I've seen like this.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

I hope you do plenty of reviews.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of My First Deer  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Some of those first experiences can be the most entertaining. You're talking about your first successful deer hunt- sounds like it was a difficult one. You actually had to chase a deer, but more importantly, you finally got it when you used an old stand that your brother had made some years previously. Sounds like you had a good time.

Characters
Those deer are always tricky.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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