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I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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Review of THE CHAMBER  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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An interesting poem about a man, who, due to their crimes, is about to be executed. As it is, it seems that the man has a prior history involving this place, as it seems that his father had also died in this location.

Thoughts
An interesting subject to thing on.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling and grammar.

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Review of Night Terrors  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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You have a man and his son looking for a creature that has been scaring their livestock. However, what they find is something most don't expect to see. Looks like the start of an interesting book.

Characters
The characters seem to be interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling and grammar.

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Review of A Trip To Nowhere  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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You have a short story about a man living in a bunker, some time after World War Three has occurred. It seems that things are rather difficult for him, especially once one learns the truth.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Well, this is an interesting short story. It involves the figures in a painting, who become worried when their owner suddenly dies in front of them. Makes one wonder about other works of art out there.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of A Young Nation  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Found It.

A short poem about our nation's history. Talks about how mistakes had been made, but we try to learn from them, and do better for the future. Even now, there's still a lot to learn from, and hope that the mistakes won't get repeated.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Trinket series!  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Here you ask a question about what your next Trinket series should be. Personally, I like books - "Redwall" comes to mind, as does "The Dragon Knight", "Discworld", "Spells, Swords & Stealth", and a few more. Lots of possibilities.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Here you ask some questions for collectors of your trinkets. Kind of useful. Personally, I like it when there's a large pool of trinkets, so that everyone can collect them, without the need for a rush.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Leviathan  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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You have a scientist who seems to be researching dolphin communication patterns, in an attempt to find proof of some theory of his. Looks rather interesting.

Characters
The scientist seems interesting, but could use a bit of expansion - do they have a spouse or love interest that supports their work?

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Complex Numbers  
for entry "In a Red Hood" 
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Ah, the truth about Fairy Tails. Something that makes folks wonder, and about how the lessons seem to change depending upon the age the story is set in. After all, folks change, so perhaps the lessons should as well. Sometimes the story gets changed with the times as well.

Thoughts
An interesting take on the stories told in the past.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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You have the start of a story where, it looks like, at a certain age, children go through a ritual to see if they can receive the ability to use magic. Among these children is the son of a noble family, who can't wait until they can use magic.

Characters
The characters seem interesting. Hope to know more about them.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar, but you might want some space between paragraphs.

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HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
So, you're some farmboy, or farmgirl, who wants to be a Hero? Well, whoop-de-do. Been around the block a time or two, with others before. Let's just hope you're not the One Last Hope! After all, there's plenty of Heroes out there - can you live up to the stories, or will you be forgotten?

Characters
Plenty of crazy characters.

Spelling and Grammar
There's some spelling and grammar issues here and there, but those can be fixed.

Thoughts
Plenty of crazy adventures, and plenty more to come. I have enjoyed adding to them.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting Poll asking what point of view they like to use when it comes to writing. In my opinion, that all depends on what kind of story one is writing. Is the story something along the lines of one telling about their day "I did..."? Is is about what "You" are doing? Or is this about what "Bob" is doing? In any case, all can be fun.

Thoughts
A nice poll to do.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestion
Instead of using the "Other" Genre, try the "Opinion" genre.

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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You have a world full of animal-like people with various levels of technology. You seem to be focused on an owl soldier who serves a rat king as a guard of some sort. Kind of makes one wonder about the history of this world.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of The longest Walk  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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You have a couple of people walking around, only it seems that someone isn't getting a certain message, and clearly doesn't understand certain signs.

An interesting read.

Characters
The characters seem to be ordinary people.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Best of luck with the contest.

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Review of Second Coming  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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You have an idea about what it would be like to have the Second Coming of Jesus Christ occur and what they'd look like. An interesting take on the idea.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
You have a bit of a block here. Sometimes a few four-to-five-sentence paragraphs can make things easier to read.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting story. You've got a couple of siblings trying to figure out a way to make money so that their home doesn't get foreclosed on. When they respond to a strange newspaper add, things get strange when they get sucked into some sort of game, and have to compete against other teams of siblings.

Characters
The characters seemed interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I didn't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of The Last Goodbye  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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You have someone who fins out some difficult news about their mother, in that she has cancer. However, they prefer to act as if they don't know about it, in order to try to enjoy what time was left.

Characters
They seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Testing  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a review for your first item, and I hope that you enjoy! *BigSmile*

This is an item that you made to see how things can be posted here. I hope that this little blurb will inspire you to write more things, such as poetry and short stories, and other crazy things. *Laugh*

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues.

Best of luck with your future items.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I stumbled across this under the Online Authors, although what really caught my attention was the name in the title - especially since my own username ought to give most a very good clue as to why it drew my eye...

What you have is a short story about a paranormal investigator, who has been hired to check out a collage. While there, he comes across a powerful entity that is causing some serious troubles.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Well, this is the start of what looks to be an interesting story. You have a young man, who seems to have been on his own for quite some time, except for the voices in his head. However, it seems that the situation is more than it appears to be. Might look at more.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an interesting poll about a person's favorite type of writing. Personally, I like all types, but my favorite is the Interactive, as you can get so many stories, all from a common origin. After all, start the Main Character off at a crossroads, and here's a few possibilities:

Heads to the North: The MC become the King of a great and powerful nation, with plenty of queens to enjoy the company of.

Heads to the South: The MC becomes a vicious and brutal Bandit Warlord with a huge price on his head, among other things.

Heads to the East: The MC gets captured by a dragon, and is forced to be its slave, or else they become lunch.

Heads to the West: They become a farmer, taxed by the King, robbed by the Bandit Warlord, and terrorized by the dragon.

Undecided: Has an encounter with a guy that has a crossbow - The End.

Plenty of fun.

Originality
Haven't encountered a poll like this.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, this is an interesting In & Out, especially if one likes to add to Interactives. Here is a place where one can learn and share tips for writing additions to those stories that take so many twists and turns, and always create a new story, despite sharing the same originating point as another. Worth looking at.

Thoughts
Very original.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Dogs of War  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
You have what looks to be the start of an interesting story. You have a woman who, for whatever reason, doesn't like non-human animals, who is creating non-human soldiers in order to fight a robotic enemy. However, an incident soon forces her to work with one of her creations, in order to survive.

Characters
The characters look interesting, but I'd like to know more about them.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

I hope to see a Part 2 to this story.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is an interesting take on the whole "Jack and the Beanstalk" - type story. You have a young woman who climbed a large beanstalk, only to encounter a friendly giant. However, things aren't so easy, especially after she encounters another giant, who isn't so friendly.

Characters
The characters are interesting, but to be honest, the giants could use names, at the very least.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar, but, instead of saying "(expletive deleted)", you could settle for a mild swear word, or perhaps bump it up to 18+ for somewhat stronger swear words.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Well, this is a cute story. You have the three typical Fantasy/Adventure classes, the Warrior, the Wizard, and the Archer, all involved in a real wreck of a story, as it turns out that some peoples' plans for the weekend get ruined, for one reason or another. More than a few good laughs here.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues.

Always be careful of wizards.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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