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2,437 Public Reviews Given
2,599 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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Review of My introduction  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is one way to introduce yourself. Little bit of a biography, little bit of poetry. I'm sure that plenty will be interested in knowing about your life, learning about who you are, and what you've done. I do hope that you'll enjoy your time on the site, and that you'll be here for many years to come - I know that I have enjoyed mine, and I've been here for quite the while.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of I am jobless  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Imagine loosing a job because someone overachieves something. There's plenty that could bring that sort of thing about. It could be because someone is over-qualified. It could be because the company got sold. It could be because of greed. There's so many ways that things could happen. It certainly makes one think about things.

Thoughts
An interesting poem, which makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a cute little chuckle. All I can say is, "Poor Bob - he's got it rough." All the things poor Bob goes through. Clearly, he's missing out on more than a few things, a lot of which would clearly help him out in life. In any case, worth a laugh, first thing in the morning.

Characters and Thoughts
I sure have to laugh at poor Bob. He can't catch a break.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Apple Jacks  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a cute poem. A woman likes to eat Apple Jacks because they remind her of her childhood. Sometimes it's the simplest of things that give us the most pleasure. It could be just enjoying a favorite treat, or watching the clouds, or rolling some dice. It can be the little things that make life worthwhile.

Characters and Thoughts
It's kind of cute in the ways one thinks of their childhood.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Gift  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A cute story about a woman who notices something odd in her garden - a scarecrow, which shouldn't be in that spot - especially since she didn't have a scarecrow. An attempt to investigate also turns up odd, as by the time she's ready to head out, the scarecrow has vanished, leaving something behind. Makes one wonder what it means.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
Don't know if it's simply a misspelling, or a change of tenses, but you have a mix of Past and Present tense words, like has when had might make more sense in the area where she finds, and cleans the ring.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A very sweet poem to read about loss. Sometimes we think about those we knew, who are no longer here. We sit down some place, like a restaurant that they once enjoyed eating at. We then have a silent toast, as we remember their laughter, and the words of wisdom, or something funny, that they once said. A poem worth thinking on.

Thoughts
A very good poem to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling and grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a cute poem about one's inner strength, even in times of difficulty. There's plenty of ways that one might fall into some sort of temptation. The real trick is to have the inner strength to rise above such things, and work to succeed, even when the odds are stacked against one's self.

Thoughts
A very interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Spooky Mission  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a Review you Requested. Enjoy!

A man comes to investigate a house that has a mystery, with the help of his manservant. When the servant ends up dead, the man realizes that there's a killer in the area. He soon encounters a woman, who is more than she seems. Will he survive the night? Only time will tell.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
The spelling and grammar look fine. However, that are some spots where the period from one sentence could use a space from the first letter of the next sentence.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Ben And Rosie  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is actually kind of cute. A young woman has to take care of her older mentally challenged brother. As it is Halloween, he ends up having to take him Trick -or-Treating. However, one of the things she wants to do, is go to a party with all the other high schoolers at their new neighborhood. She ends up finding a way to get in, only, things end up changing when a prank almost ends up going wrong.

Characters
The characters look interesting, and I'd like to read more about them.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting piece. You have a poem about luck and success, how they can go hand-in-hand. You have a Gambler, you can try his luck, but sooner or later, it will turn against him. Then there's the CEO - they get a lot of success but mistreating those under them, could lead to their very downfall at some point in the future.

Thoughts
Looks like a very interesting little piece, and makes one do more than a bit of thinking about their actions and such.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A cute selection of poems, which were all written for a contest. The one is about someone going to visit their girlfriend's place. The second is about someone with a lot of hair. The third is about someone who has has way too much to drink. All of them are worth having a little chuckle, or two, over.

Thoughts
A cute selection of limericks to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Speaking Ground  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A cute little poem, telling of picnics by a cabin. As someone who has enjoyed more than a few such picnics, it makes me think of my youth, and makes me long for those easier times of my childhood, when my parents, siblings, and I would enjoy spending time together, and makes me wish that I had such days back. I remember a day when we had a picnic in the middle of winter - that was fun.

Thoughts
A very cute poem to read. Takes me back to my childhood

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this looks like a fun activity. Read some books that are related to a given theme, make a review for the books, and you will earn prizes. The more one reads, the better the prizes they'll get. Makes for a great way to encourage people to read books. Looks like a whole lot of fun.

Thoughts
This looks like a very fun activity, and I do hope that folks come to try it out.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting piece. A strange murder has occurred, and no one is sure as to what happened to the victim, who has vanished. What secrets are kept in this case, especially when, in the fulness of time, another murder happens. One must wonder what was going on. Talk about a mystery. Time to get a magnify glass.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Ocean Fling  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a cute little poem. A missing boat sparks the writer to talk about it, along with some thoughts about why it left its mooring point. Why did the boat leave? Did it see, or hear, something? A bigger question is; will it have a safe end, and be returned home? One has to wonder, as they go to watch the boats out on any body of water.

Thoughts
A very cute poem that made me chuckle.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Some days, one has to look to the past, to see how one gets to where they are now. A police commissioner thinks about how his city gained a hero, in the form of a dragon, who works to keep the city safe from harm. Criminals now have more than cops to watch out for, and must keep an eye on the sky these days.

Characters
Getting to know more about these people. Hope to see more.

I don't see any issues with spelling and grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is worth a cute chuckle. Who needs Batman, or Superman, when you can have, The Derg! You don't want to be the one she's after, for they have now put their hunting instincts towards hunting down criminals that threaten the safety of their city. Run away now! Nope - Too late! Told you to leave town.

Characters
The characters look interesting. Might want to find out more.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling and grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Feline Wrath  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, while I've never tried to give a cat a bath, I do remember at least one cat that was stuck out in the rain, one that didn't like it at all. (Looks at the scars on his left hand, ones left by one pissed off momma cat that they'd tried to catch.)

Needless to say, anyone who has had to deal with a wet, and angry, furball can relate to this poem, especially if said cat left its mark upon the one that made them wet. Laughin in pain at this.

Characters
The characters are very relatable.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
When five hired assassins gather for a job, they soon learn that one of them has a huge bounty on their heads. The problem is, no one knows which one has the bounty. For all any know, it's a trap for all of them, with all of them having bounties on their heads. Will this group of killers figure out who is friend and who is foe? Only time will tell.

Characters
The characters are all interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
As if being mutated wasn't bad enough, several individuals get abducted by aliens. It soon becomes a fight for survival, as the group tries to buy time, not only for themselves, but for the planet itself, with what is at stake. Will they be able to free themselves? Only time will tell the tale.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Forest Harmony  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A cute poem about a woodland forest, describing the sights and sounds, and about how one broken branch causes a bit of chaos, until things eventually settle down, back to normal. Seems to sound about right to me, especially giving how things are, in the woods. Worth a little chuckle, for sure.

Thoughts
Reminds me of a stroll through the woods.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of My Heart  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a Review you Requested. Enjoy!

You have a short, and cute, little poem. Seems that many years prior, someone had encountered another. As a result, the love between them began to grow, and blossom. It is certainly something worth chuckling over, as it makes one think of their own loves over the years.

Thoughts
Makes one think of the loves they've had over the years.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Curse Unravel  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh, this is a cute story. You have a woman going to meet the love of her life. She wants to be with them. However, it seems that their love has a secret so scary, they are afraid that it might drive her away. Will love be enough to allow these two to be as one? Only time will tell, and perhaps, maybe, love will be more than enough.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Crabby Dash  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a cute little poem about crabs racing. They must get to the ocean, and they all rush to reach it. Some just dash, and other sneak. Some even get scared. Oh, who will win? Who will make it? Who won't? Plenty of questions to be asked, as these crabs race one. Very cute.

Thoughts
I have to say, pretty cute to look at. Makes one think of a few vacations.

Spelling and Grammar
I do not see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
People grow old - this is a fact. This fact includes Heroes. So, what happens when a group of Heroes tries to raise the next generation, in an attempt to prevent a bad future from happening? What happens when now-adult mutants must raise new, and younger, mutants? How will they navigate around those who spread anti-mutant information? Come and find out.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any real issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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