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Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Angus,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your story "Those Crazy Mountain Boyz, firstly I usually read poetry but the title of this piece drew me in and boy am I glad it did, I was glued to this story, one fault though lol what a shame it ended, well done with this one, thoroughly enjoyed it. Keep doing what you do best. Take care 😁👍 Lady Elf
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Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello HuntersMoon,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your piece "The Perfect Valentine", firstly you couldn't get a better title than this one. Loved the way you turned this one around to a four legged friend 😁 and how very true is this write, she will never let you down and will always love you 😍 my favourite being,

She'll listen to your bad jokes, even think that you are clever.
She'll never stare into your eyes and drolly say "Whatever..."
She's always up for kissing and she won't steal the covers.
She'll protect when you need it and scrutinize your lovers.
The flow of the poem was spot on and I noted no errors, really enjoyed the read. Take care Lady Elf
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Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Intuey,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your piece "Drifting on Sound Waves" Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this poem, you have done a fantastic job with this write, the imagery was vivid and I felt so relaxed just reading it, very beautifully written and the flow of the poem was also perfect. Looking forward to reading more pieces from you. Take care Lady
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Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Crow, Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group, thought I would drop by your port to review a couple of pieces, this one really attracted me to read it, I love pieces from their childhood days, love to read strong emotional poetry, that's also how I write, I've had alot of ups and downs in my life, dad dying when I was eleven of a heart attack on Christmas eve when he was putting presents under the tree and then abusive relationship for 21 Years and a horrendous time struggling with depression, so I find it quite difficult to write happy pieces. This piece was an absolute delight to read, didn't struggle with it at all, very smooth and the rhythm and rhyming was spot on, I also spotted no errors, I shall be giving this piece the five stars it deserves, I love how you write with so much emotion. Look forward to reading more pieces from you. Lady Elf, please take a look at at my poetry if you have time, I suggest 21 Years or Old Brighton Town. Many thanks 😁👍
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Review of You are Not There  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Siddup 69, Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your piece "You Are Not There" firstly this was a truly strong emotional piece full of sadness of the loss of a loved one, I so know this feeling, life can be so difficult sometimes,the pain of losing someone so close to you,I enjoyed this piece of poetry. Keep writing 😁 Lady Elf, if you have a moment would it be possible to take a look at a piece of mine called Old Brighton Town. Many thanks
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Review of DROWNING  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Lady Elf here dropping you a review from the WDC Power Reviewers Group, firstly the title is spot on for the content of this piece, the imagery in this poem was very strong, riding the tide of emotion absolutely beautiful words, I have been here, felt the emotion you describe, and it is truly how you describe it here, just like you are drowning, very well done and I noted no errors, keep writing Lady Elf, please could I ask if you have a moment could you take a look at a piece of mine called Old Brighton Town. Many thanks
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Review of Grandad  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your piece "Grandad" This is such a moving and sad poem, the title is appropriate for this piece and the imagery is spot on also, I know exactly what this person is going through, had the same with my Grandad, he was just fantastic, the things he did with me I will never forget, life can be so painful, you take it for granted when you're young but as you get older you realise that you don't really have that long with these wonderful people, truly a beautifully written piece. Keep writing Lady Elf
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Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your piece "Crop Circle Armada" firstly the title suited the piece. I enjoyed this poem from start to finish, the imagery was also very good, you took me to that field as I watched the UFO. Very well done, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Keep writing Lady Elf
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Review of AT THE GRAVE  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your piece 'At The Grave' firstly title was appropriate for the content, I really enjoyed this poem, it flowed beautifully, the rhyming and rhythm were also spot on, I noted no errors. Lady Elf Keep writing
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Review of broken  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your piece "Broken" firstly title was very good for the content of your poem, I enjoyed this short piece, read smooth and the imagery was also good, I think the only thing I would change is the the last line, instead of saying into a million of pieces, I would say into a million pieces. Lovely read though. Lady Elf
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Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group giving you a review on your piece "Our Neighbours Leaves" firstly this was brilliantly done, quite enjoyable as well, I'm forever brushing up leaves from not only my trees but also everybody else's lol, read very smoothly, also no errors were spotted. Good read Lady Elf
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Review of Never Again...  
Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your piece "Never Again" firstly what can I say, it was fantastically brilliant, was easy to read and flowed beautifully, no errors were noted. Lady Elf
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Review of The Making  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your piece "The Making" firstly this short piece is absolutely fantastic, I love everything about it, it read beautifully,I love to connect with people through my own words, how I write, how I express myself. Great work, look forward to reading more pieces from you. Lady Elf
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Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group giving you a review on your piece Just A Picture Of You, firstly you have done a good job with this, the title is appropriate for the content, I must say I enjoyed it from start to finish, it definitely had me hooked into reading on further, I noted no errors, the imagery was also spot on, look forward to reading more pieces from you. Lady Elf.
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Review of Frost  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group to give you a review on your piece, Frost, firstly I must say the imagery was fantastic, I liked the flow of the piece too, this was quite enjoyable and no errors were noted, thanks for sharing you lovely piece with us. Lady Elf
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Review of Flower's  
Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group to give you a review on your piece of poetry called Flowers, firstly the title is appropriate for the piece, I enjoyed this, the flow was good, I think the imagery could have been a little better, but it was still a good try, would like to see some more pieces from you. Well done and keep writing. Lady Elf
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Review of I fear  
Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group to give you a review on your piece, I Fear, firstly I enjoyed this short poem, I think to be honest nearly every couple have a worry of this happening. The flow of the poem was good, imagery and rhythm was also good. Well done 😊 look forward to reading more from you. Take care Lady Elf
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Review by Lady Elf
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, hello again, Lady Elf here from WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping by to give you a review on A Walk In The Woods, again this is fantastic, I absolutely love your poetry, you paint such a beautiful picture with your words, The imagery is spot on, you take me from my seat, straight into the woods where everything comes alive, you can't improve this in any way its perfect. Lady Elf, I'm sorry I just love reviewing your work.If you have time would you be able to take a look at a piece of mine called Bruised Little Bums? A 70s day at the beach in memory of my Dad. Many thanks
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Review of Liar  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Lady Elf here from the WDC power reviewers group to give you a review on your piece Liar, firstly a big welcome from Lady Elf and a very well done for your first poem, this is a good read, I enjoyed it even though it's very sad, imagery is very strong, look forward to reading more pieces from you. Lady Elf
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Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Lady Elf here from the WDC power reviewers group giving you a review on It is ok to not be ok ??, I found this a good read, none of us are perfect, and that's ok, be yourself and live your life at the end of the day we were born this way, you may have a girl who is not the prettiest but she could have the best personality in the world, and that's what matters. This poem really does make you think about what important in life, well done, I liked it.If you have a moment it would be lovely if you could take a look at a piece of mine called Bruised Little Bums, it's a 70s day at the beach in memory of my Father. Many thanks Jen 😁👍
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Review of One More Step  
Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group to give you a review on your piece One More Step, I must say this piece of poetry is very encouraging, whether it's with our daily struggles through life, or anxiety and depression, wiythI could have with this when I had a phobia of escalators lol, I found no errors and I really enjoyed it. Please may I ask if you have time maybe you could take a look at a piece of mine called Bruised Little Bums, it's a 70s day out to the beach, I enjoy writing pieces about my Father as he died Christmas Eve when I was eleven. Many thanks, Lady Elf
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Review of Thunder  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Lady Elf here with the WDC power reviewers group, I am giving you a review on your piece Thunder,Firstly I enjoyed this very much, the imagery was spot on, my favourite being Rain Falls, Fire dies, I wipe my brow. That was close. Wow. I found there to be no errors, look forward to reading more pieces like this. Well done Lady Elf, if you have a moment maybe you could take a look at a piece of mine called Bruised Little Bums, it's about a 70s day out to the beach, I wrote this in memory of my Dad. Many thanks Jen
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Review of Winter ride  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Lady Elf here from WDC power reviewers group, I've dropped by to give you a review on your poem called Winter Ride. Firstly I really enjoyed this beautiful piece, it flowed smoothly and the imagery was spot on, I found no errors, my favourite is the first line, The snort of horses fill the air, love it. I must say you have some beautiful pieces of poetry in your port. Lady Elf, could I please ask you to take a moment to have a look at a piece of mine called Bruised Little Bums, it's a 70s day at the beach, I love writing about my dad, it helps me to remember him. Many thanks Jen
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Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Lady Elf has dropped by to give you a review on your piece called Salute to my God-given Life, firstly this is fantastic, It read beautifully smooth, I had no problems with reading it out loud and found no errors, I must say you have some beautiful pieces of poetry in your port, look forward to reading more pieces of your fine poetry. Lady elf, please could I ask if you have time could you take a look at a poem of mine called Bruised Little Bums, a 70s day out at the beach when my dad was alive. Many thanks Jen.
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Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Lady Elf here, firstly this was absolutely breathtaking, the imagery was spot on, I pictured myself slowly strolling up the long stretch of golden sands, a slight breeze to keep me cool looking for some little good luck stone with a hole in the middle, I thank you for warming me up on a cold winters evening, your poetry is truly beautiful, would love to see more pieces from you, I found no errors. Lady Elf, Please could I ask if you could take a moment to have a look at a piece of mine for me, it's a 70s day at the beach when I was young, with my dad who unfortunately is no longer with us.Many thanks
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