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Review of I hate love  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, Lady Elf here from the WDC power reviewers group to give you a review on your piece I Hate Love, firstly very well done with this one,the imagery was spot on and the poem flowed beautifully, the words I love you are not meant in the same way as it used to be, a bit like the high level of divorce nowadays.The poem read very smoothly and I found no errors. Look forward to reading more pieces from you. Lady Elf, please could you take a moment to look at a piece for me in honor of my Father died when I was eleven, this poem is called Bruised Little Bums. Many thanks
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Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Lady elf here from the WDC power reviewers group to give a review on your piece Come With Me Beneath The Sea, firstly fantastic title for you beautifully created piece of poetry, the imagery was spot on, I was with you, what an array of colours it was with exotic fish swimming in front of my eyes, I love places that cannot be ruined by man, great job, no errors were found and thank you so much for my journey, please could I ask if you have a moment, could you take a look at this piece in honor of my Father called Bruised Little Bums, many thanks Jen
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Review of Endless Ripples  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Lady elf here, I just love all your work, this one is just glorious too, you have such a smoothness with your words, they are relaxing, the imagery takes me right there to that lake with those ripples, there's no errors. Only one thing I can say is Absolutely Breathtaking.
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Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Lady Elf here to give a review on your piece When I was a young boy in the 50's, firstly this was fantastic, the imagery was spot on, flowed smoothly and I found no errors, I can relate to this piece so much, myself born in the sixties was great, My dad sadly died Christmas Eve when I was eleven, he never worried about us playing in the woods, we would camp at the bottom of the garden, go catching minnows, I would sit in the back of his old Land Rover loving him driving up the river, fab times, loved it back then, wouldn't change a thing, oh just that he was here now, thankyou for the read. Lady Elf
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Review of Lonely  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Lady Elf here to give you a review on your piece Lonely, firstly I must say it was beautifully written, very smooth to read, good imagery,it's lovely to sometimes be needed or feel wanted,it's satisfying when you succeed at something to be able to share with that special someone.I shall be giving this beautifully written poem the five stars it deserves, If you get a moment it would be great if you could take a look at a piece for me called Bruised Little Bums, a 70's day at the beach when I was young, Dad passed when I was eleven so I love sometimes to share those special times that I had with him. Keep writing as you have done here. Many thanks Lady Elf
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Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Lady Elf here, Happy 2017, I enjoyed this, If I had my horses still, there's no better place to be than in the saddle full gallop, everything flowed smoothly and was easy to read, no errors were found.Rhyme and rhythm were spot on. Keep writing Lady Elf
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Review of Gray  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Lady Elf here to give you a review on your piece Gray, firstly Happy 2017, Well this was fantastic, the imagery was very strong. Your poetry flowed smoothly and was easy to read, I found no errors, Without a doubt this piece deserves a five star but I feel the word Gray could stand out better against the other lines, as the word Grey is very strong throughout this piece of beautiful poetry, look forward to seeing what you could do with it just to basically sharpen it up, if your happy with it fully then please by all means ignore my last comment. Many thanks for sharing. Lady Elf
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Review of Autumn's Palette  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Lady Elf here, firstly Happy 2017, I really enjoyed this piece on Autumn, you managed to take me from this cold winters night into a rich autumn day with the crunching of leaves beneath my feet, full of colour and warmth,I must say I like the way you write, the imagery and the story you tell in your poetry is good, well done and keep writing. Lady Elf
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Review of Simply Rain  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Lady Elf dropping by to review Simply Rain, the imagery was I must say fantastic, rhythm was smooth and I found no errors, through your poetry I smelt and felt the rainfall, after a long spell of muggy hot weather, the first downpour always leaves everything so fresh. Loved it, keep writing, please could I ask if you have time could you take a look at Cothi Valley, many thanks Lady Elf.
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Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Lady Elf from the WDC Power Reviewers Group, This was fantastic, I was there in the forests fighting the enemy, taking power on our wild long-maned stallions, brilliant, rhythm and rhyme worked well, imagery fantastic, no errors were noted, keep writing. Lady Elf
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Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Lady Elf again to drop a review, Wow I could read your poetry over and over again, it was painful but fantastic, rhythm and rhyme was smooth and flowed with ease, imagery was strong and I found no errors. I shall be giving this piece the five stars it deserves. Keep writing Lady Elf


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Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Lady Elf dropping by to give another review, this was one of my favourites, beautiful title for this well executed piece, rhyme and rhythm flowed with ease, great imagery. Loved it, keep writing Lady Elf
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Review of Roses in Heaven  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Lady Elf here to give you a review, firstly I must say you have some beautiful poetry pieces in your portfolio. Roses in Heaven is a lovely title for this piece, each stanza flowed smoothly, it was a pleasure to read, no errors were found. Write on Happy 2017 Lady Elf
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Review of One Last Request  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Lady Elf here, what an absolute beautiful poem, your title suits perfectly, rhyme and rhythm flowed with ease, no errors were found, myself owning seven lurchers knows exactly what that's like, it tear's your heart out when the time comes, but thankfully for them they can go when its time unlike ourselves, I love them all like family members. Go steady and happy 2017
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Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Lady Elf has come to give you a review, this I must say is beautiful, fantastic title "Mama's Bicycle Ride", people so often take for granted Mother Nature, so many beautiful places are unfortunately being built on, years ago this wasn't the case, when I was a small girl I use to play by myself in the forest, pack sandwiches and go catching minnows for the day, but sadly now it's not like that, kids were kids, now kids want to be adults at such a young age, shame really. I found no errors in this beautifully written piece, if you have time please take a look at my poem Cothi Valley, I live in wales, pretty remote, bleak in winter, but I wouldn't change a thing. Have a great 2017 Lady Elf


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Review of " The Ceiling "  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well I came in to see your port, and don't want to leave, I will definitely be leaving you with an awardicon, I could leave you with three, but only have enough gps for the one, I shall be visiting again for The Crows, that's when I've done some more reviewing lol
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Review of Night Wolves  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Elf again, this poem sums up its title perfectly, no errors were found,your poetry has a perfect flow, I could read every piece you write, it's not choppy in any way, it sings from the highest clouds. Keep writing,I've fan'd you, look forward to more work from you
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Review of Winter  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello from Lady Elf, firstly Happy New Year, this poem sums up its title beautifully, I enjoyed the second stanza very much, I found there to be no errors, each stanza flowed smoothly to the next, I think people of today with such busy lives have less time to appreciate nature and all of its beauties, personally its the one thing I love to do, take in our beautiful landscape, where I live in Wales, it's truly breathtaking and in winter it's harsh, but I love it, thank you for sharing this fantastic little poem with us. Keep on writing Lady Elf
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Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This a very beautiful, firstly I am very sorry for your loss, your husband would be very proud of this piece that you have written in his memory, this is very close to my own heartbreaking events that I have suffered myself, I hope you find peace and happiness in the beautiful children that you created with your wonderful husband, very sad and upsetting piece but I enjoyed the read,I must say it helps me to write my experiences in form of poetry, I get a lot of satisfaction sharing my work with the lovely people on here. God bless.go safe Lady Elf
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Review of Jack Frost  
Review by Lady Elf
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed this very much, beautifully written, I must say I read it through twice, flows smoothly, no errors were found in this wintery poem, look forward to reading more of your lovely written pieces, I shall award the five stars that this deserves, keep writing, if you have time please take a look at my port, maybe Old Leafy Lane or Cothi Valley, many thanks. Lady Elf
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Review by Lady Elf
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Lady Elf here, this is so bang on to what depression is like, a constant battle with your own head, your own thoughts, making yourself do things, when really you just want to give in and let it win,it seems to last forever and never gives you a break, I suffered depression for twenty years, so I know it very well,I dreaded every time it came back, so glad youve managed to find the strength to beat this dark beast,In a horified type of way I am drawn to these type of poems, you have done a very good job here putting it down exactly how it affected you. well done. Keep writing, when you have time it would be lovely for you to take a look at my poem on depression, many thanks Jen
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Review of Blessed by Stress  
Review by Lady Elf
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a fantastic piece,I've read a couple of your pieces and loved them both, rhymes beautifully, very well done, keep writing these awesome pieces,If you get the time would you be able to read either two of my poems, Depression and Marmalade Hil, once again thank you very much.
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Review of A-mused  
Review by Lady Elf
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful flow to this piece,I enjoyed it very much, wouldn't it be lovely if life was like this,beauty,friendship and kindness spread across the world, shame when we get older we stop believing, life is a world of fantasy when you are young, keep writing. Could I ask you kindly to review my poem the chocolate patrol many thanks Jen.
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Review of Blest Love  
Review by Lady Elf
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, loved this poem,I found it easy to read and everything flowed beautifully,rhyming was smooth, a very good job, would love to see some more pieces like this, understood it well, not all this fancy jargon very well done, please could you take the time to give feedback on the chocolate patrol many thanks
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Review of Insecurity  
Review by Lady Elf
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well what can I say, this was fab, everything flowed fantastically, beautiful rhyming would love to see more of these from you, to be honest, couldn't fault it. well done.Would love some feedback on my poem Buddy,welcome positive and negative comments, many thanks jen
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