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Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (5.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. " Secrets of The Night"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
Fantastic title my friend, this really hooked me in and I wasn't disappointed, this is a wonderful write with brilliant imagery, my favourite being the fifth stanza.You painted a lovely picture with your word choice which helped to bring the poem to life.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
The poem flowed extremely well and I encountered no distractions whilst reading this well-written piece.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
The imagery was spot on in this poem, you took me, thank god from my computer chair, I'm doing a WDC animal power raid to the depths of the forest at night-time to just sit and listen to all of gods creatures, excellent job my friend and thank you for getting me out.

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
As far as I could see, there were no errors in this piece, grammar was also spot on.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
You have managed to do a fantastic job with this write, I thoroughly enjoyed it, It was an absolute pleasure to read, I thank you for sharing your wonderful poem with us at WDC.

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review of Who's the Boss?  
Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (5.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. " Who's The Boss"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
Well, my friend, I can tell you who the boss is lol he is.
Great poem, the title definitely hooked me in and the content kept me reading, an absolute treat to read, beautifully set out and flowed smoothly whilst reading, Overall fantastic.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
I can understand why this got Honorable Mention, it was fabulous
I encountered no distractions whilst reading this piece.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
The imagery of this poem was spot on, this is one hell of a lucky chappie, you manage to paint a picture with your words which helped to bring this poem to life, I thank you for sharing this wonderful piece with us at WDC.

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
As far as I could see I spotted no errors, the grammar was also spot on.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
The author has done a great job with this piece and I thoroughly enjoyed it, it will definitely be getting a massive thumbs up and five shiny stars.

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review of Cat  
Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (5.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. "Cat"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
This is a beautifully written piece, your word choice was absolutely spot on, this really helped to bring the poem to life, you hooked me in and I found myself wanting to read from start to finish, a big thumbs up from me, this shall definitely be getting five shiny stars.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
The poem flowed beautifully and I encountered no distractions whilst reading, a little gem.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
I loved the wat you described the finer things of the cat, great imagery here, your words really brought the poem alive.

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
As far as I could see, I spotted no errors.Grammar was also spot on.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
The author has managed to do a fantastic job with this write, no suggestions.

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review of Snooty Limerick  
Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (5.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. 'Snooty Limerick'

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
Well, I really enjoyed this fun write, Is woody the little chap in the photo? If so I can see what looks like a little cavalier, not totally sure, I have big lurchers and they definitely wouldn't have clothes put on them lol
Anyways this poor little chappie dressed in his sweatshirt and hoodie with all the other big strapping dogs wondering "What the hell is this in front of us"
Poor little mite, least he's warm. Wonderful imagery with this write, you have managed to paint a wonderful picture with your words, a big thumbs up from me.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
beautiful flowing piece, I encountered no distractions whilst reading. Great job

*StarfishB* Imagery:
This was by far the best thing about this poem, your word choice was spot on and I thoroughly enjoyed it.

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
As far as I could see, I spotted no errors, I found the grammar also to be spot on.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
Lovely, Lovely, Lovely, This author has managed to do a great job with this poem. I shall be giving this five shiny stars.I thank you for sharing your lovely poem with us here at WDC.

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (5.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. "The Hope for all abused animals"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
This was a beautifully written piece with great emotion and impact and so very true, your word choice really helped to bring your poem to life, and for me, that's a big thumbs up. Animals ask for nothing in return just food, water and love, we as humans should be able to provide that without cruelty, there is far too much cruelty in the world, that's why this weekend we are focusing on animal cruelty. An absolute wonderful job, this poem shall definitely be getting five of my shiny stars.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
I encountered no distractions whilst reading this piece, the poem flowed extremely well.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
This was the best part of the write, fantastic vivid emotional content and that's what you need to hit a subject like this, I did a similar piece as yours called Blood Money for an animal cruelty contest.

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
As far as I could see I spotted no errors in this wonderful write.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
The author has managed to do a great job with this piece, not really a subject that people like to read, but as I see it if we don't see it, we cannot act on it, we must stand up and fight against animal cruelty, Overall a brilliant job my friend!

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (5.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. "The Legend of Finnegan"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
Wow Wow, Wow, good old Finnegan, This is an awesome poem, the imagery here is absolutely spot on, your word choice really helped to bring the poem to life, a great job I must say.The title was also bang on, I really can't fault this piece, it was a pleasure to read.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
The flow of this poem was fantastic and I encountered no distractions whilst reading.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
This was by far the best thing about this write was the imagery, I truly loved it.

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
As far as I could see, I spotted no errors, I found the grammar also to be spot on.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
Yes, lol definitely another poem like this my friend, Awesome
This poem shall be getting five shiny stars from me. Definitely, write more of these.

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (5.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. " The Poodle and the Pit"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
Well, I thoroughly enjoyed this write, I must say I was glued to the words of this piece, a fun read and the imagery just took me to that house to watch these two, a truly wonderful job.This piece was an absolute pleasure to read.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
I encountered no problems whilst reading this poem, I found the flow of the poem good.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
This had to be the best part of the poem for me, your chosen words helped to bring this write to life, the title definitely drew me in and I must say, you kept me there, so a big thumbs up for that.

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
I noted no errors, if there were it didn't bother the way this poem read.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
Absolutely none, I loved what the author did with this piece, I thank you for sharing this with us, it was a pleasure to read.

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (5.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. "The Sleeping Dod on my Couch"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
Oh, I must say I really enjoyed this piece, owning seven dogs myself, I know exactly what its like to not have a sofa lol, nor a bed, they all whine in turn to get on the sofas so they don't have to lie on the floor, a real hard life in my house.This was such a wonderful poem, your chosen words helped to bring the poem to life, a great job.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
This writew flowed extremly well, I encountered no distrations whilst reading.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
This was by far the best thing about this piece, your word choice was perfect.

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
I noticed no errors in this write, grammar was also spot on.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
No suggestions for this poem, the author did a great job, the title drew me in and I was glued from start to finish. A true pleasure to read, well done my friend.This shall be getting five shiny stars that it deserves.

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review of Morning Quiet  
Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (3.5)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. "Morning Quiet"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
This is a lovely piece, I must say I enjoyed this write but there a few errors that need to be ironed out, mainly spelling and grammar, other than that it was a pleasing poem to read.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
I must say the flow of this poem was good, I encountered no problems whilst reading, overall, a good job.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
I think a little more could have been done for the poem to stand out a little more, I think with a few chosen words this poem could have come to life a lot more than what it has, but don't get me wrong it was still a great little piece, please don't be disheartened by constructive criticism, it really does help you to improve. When I was first started I was getting some negative feedback, but after taking it in and reading a few times myself, I thought to myself maybe they are right, it does need a bit of tweaking and to be honest its the only way we improve, okay chin up, it's still very nice.

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
This is where there are a few hiccups, I must say sometimes I lack in the grammar section.
Right here we go: 1st stanza there is a spelling mistake (slow)
4th stanza (peaceful)
4TH stanza just needs a coma.
5th stanza Solitary musings stilled, just needs a coma.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
A lovely little poem, with a few tweaks it could be a fantastic piece. If you would like me to check it when you have righted a couple of wrongs, then, by all means, come back to me.Overall, you have done a fine job.

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review of My African Gray  
Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (5.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem.{/c 'My African Gray'

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
I thoroughly enjoyed this piece, the imagery was spot on, and what a clever girl Katie is, let's hope she doesn't learn too many swear words lol, When I was young my dad taught out big parrot every swear word under the sun, not good for visitors, I suppose it's okay if you don't like them. This poem was an absolute pleasure to read.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
This poem flowed extremely well and I encountered no problems whilst reading, the rhyming was also spot on.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
Great imagery with this piece, your chosen words helped to bring the poem to life which made this write fantastic.




*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
As far as I could see, I spotted no errors, and the grammar was also bang on, well done my friend.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
No suggestions for this poem, I found it to be a delight to read and I thank you for sharing this wonderful write with us here, this will definitely be getting five shiny stars, well done.

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (4.5)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. "When the rooster crows"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
This was a fantastic piece with fabulous imagery, this rooster is quite a character I think, I know myself I have golden pheasants and boy are they noisy, and they love to show off and strut their stuff in front of the ladies.Yes, I thoroughly enjoyed this poem.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
This poem flowed beautifully and I encountered no problems whilst reading, it was an absolute joy to read.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
This was by far the best thing about the poem, the imagery was spot on, you managed to paint a picture with your words which helped to bring the poem to life. Great job.

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
There were just a couple of tweaks in this section I'm afraid, nothing major to worry about: Their voice is needed to travel,
They listen to anothers tale unravel. 'another's'

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
A fantastic write with excellent imagery, just needing a couple of tweaks to make it perfect. Overall a brilliant write, I thank you for sharing this wonderful piece with us here, well done with this one.

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review of My Critter Zoo  
Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (5.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. "My Critters Zoo"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
This is an absolute fabulous poem, with wonderful imagery and also an excellent story to go with it, everything was spot on and it was a pleasure to read, this is a definite winner in my eyes. This fantastic write will be getting five shiny stars from me. Overall: Brilliant

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
This poem flowed extremely well and I encountered no problems whilst reading, rhyming was also spot on, a wonderful piece that was a treat to read.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
Well, what can I say here the imagery was the best part of this poem, I believed every word written down, I loved your word choice, this helped to bring the poem to life, great job.

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
As far as I could see, I spotted no errors and I found the grammar also to be bang on.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
No suggestions for this write, it was an absolute joy to read and I thank you for sharing this wonderful poem with us here.

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (3.5)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. ' Walking Chocolate My Dog'

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
This was a delightful little poem about your dog Chocolate and how he enjoys his walks, but I did find a few errors in this piece, please don't take anything I say personally, it is only to better yourself, I was exactly the same when I started here, I got a little upset with not so good reviews but trust me it really does help, it's the only way to improve my friend.



*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
I had to read this piece a couple of times to make sense of it, not in a bad way, though. I think it's not always a good idea to force rhymes if the story doesn't make sense, I tend to work on title then ending and then work on what rhymes fit the sentences, I don't know if this helps, but please don't be offended, do come back to me after a few edits have been made and I shall review it again for you.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
Great imagery in this piece, I can see a dog pulling to get to those fields for a run. you have done a good job but just needs a bit of tweaking.

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
A few mistakes in this section I'm afraid, the first line you have spelt across wrong, after streets I think there needs to be a coma.
To be honest 2 would be better as two, it gives the poem a better feel.
Finally the last line I struggled with, does it really need to be there, if so, I think it reads better as SPOILT.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
A nice little poem but will be much better with a bit of tweaking and remove anything that you think shouldn't be there, a great try, I do hope I have not upset you in any way.Definitely, keep writing and don't be put off by people's reviews, we are here to help.



Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review of Never say never  
Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello My Friend,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. 'Never Say Never'

Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.

* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
This was a great little poem about a man who gets enjoyment from feeding stray cats, mind you this is something I have done myself lol and before you know it half the neighbourhoods cats turn up, I thoroughly enjoyed this piece, it's nice to know there are some friendly folk out there caring about God's beautiful animals.

* Rhyme and Meter:
This was a very free flowing write and I encountered no problems whilst reading.

* Imagery:
Great imagery here, your word choice helped to bring the poem to life, great job, I enjoyed it very much.

* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
I found there to be no errors in this poem, the write had good grammar also.

* Suggestions:
There are no suggestions for this great little gem, I enjoyed it thoroughly, I thank you for sharing it with us here, it was a pleasure to read.

Thank you for sharing your poem it shall be getting five shiny stars from me. Write On!

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Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello My Friend,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. 'Look Who's Coming For Dinner'

Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.

* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
This poem was extremely well written, with fantastic imagery, a poem about a family Thanksgiving dinner with an extra visitor, shame the poor little mite wasn't able to have a munch on some tatties lol, but at least he was thought about for years to come. lol

* Rhyme and Meter:
The rhythm of the poem flowed extremely well and I encountered no problems whilst reading.

* Imagery:
This poem had fabulous imagery, your chosen word choice helped to bring this poem to life.

* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
I noted no errors and I found the grammar to be spot on.

* Suggestions:
Well, what can I say overall this was a great read, maybe the little mite at the end in the box, sat up, wiped his brow and joined you for a few tatties lol, no it was fantastic.This shall be getting five shiny stars from me.

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On!

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Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Whitemorn,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem "Seashore Serenity" firstly the title was spot on for the content of this piece,this was truly a beautifully written poem, your word choice helped to bring the poem to life,the imagery was excellent and it was an absolute pleasure to read,the poem flowed extremely well and I noted no errors, Overall, beautifully written with great imagery. 😁😁👍 definitely keep writing. Lady


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Review of What Love Is  
Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Espero,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem "What Love Is" firstly the title is spot on for the content of this write, you have managed to do a fine job with this beautifully written piece of poetry, your word choice was exceptional and it helped to bring the poem to life, the write flowed extremely well and I encountered no problems whilst reading, also no errors were spotted, my favourite part being,

Bringing sunshine in the day,
Comfort through the night,
Plays music soft and light
Brought together in ballet.

Overall this was an fantastically written piece with beautiful imagery, I thank you for sharing and it was a pleasure to read. 😁😁👍 Lady
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Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Keaton Foster,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem "Cut My Arm Bleeding" I found this piece on the read &review page and so glad I did, you have done a fantastic job with this, a dark vivid write but beautifully written and worded, the set up of the poem was also lovely, I encountered no problems whilst reading this piece. and I am a great fan of your poetry, excellent job my friend 😁😁👍 I thank you for sharing this write and it was a pleasure to read. Keep writing. Lady
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Review of Forevermore  
Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Angela 444,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. "Forevermore" firstly a cracking title for this piece which oozes beautiful imagery and your word choice was spot on, helping to bring the poem to life, the flow, rhythm and rhyme was also fantastic, I enjoyed it immensely, I encountered no problems whilst reading and a big thumbs up on this one.😁😁👍 definitely keep writing. Lady
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Review of Supinity  
Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Professor Q,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem "Supinity" This was beautifully written and the word choice was spot on, it was done with taste,the flow of this write was smooth and I encountered no problems whilst reading, it was steamy, an excellent write for Valentines, no errors were spotted as far as I could see. Overall it was fantastic and thank you for sharing it with us.😁😁👍 keep writing Lady
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Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Mary Ann MCphedran,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem "The Awakening" you have done an excellent job with this piece, your word choice helped to bring this poem to life, the imagery was spot on and it was a delight to read, I encountered no problems whilst reading this piece and I noted no errors, Overall it was extremely well written and you managed to bring delight on this cold February morning.😁👍 Lady
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Review of Take My Weapon  
Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Keaton Foster,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem "Take My Weapon" firstly the title of this piece was spot on for the content, I must say you are a fantastic poet,each write is beautifully worded and flows with ease, an absolute delight to read, I thank you for sharing your lovely work with us here. Definitely keep writing 😁👍 Lady
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Review of The Gift.  
Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello My friend,😁

Well, how lovely was that, what a beautifully worded poem, that really came from the heart, I encountered no problems with this write, it flowed fantastically, yep you will be fine my friend 😁 you deserve it, this piece will be getting a big five stars.Keep writing Jen.
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Review of Everything To Me.  
Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello All smiles,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem "Everything To Me" firstly love your name 'All Smiles" which is exactly what this piece did for me, the title is spot on for the content of this poem, loved your chosen words, it really helped to bring this poem to life, I must say the flow was also bang on and I encountered no problems whilst reading it, would love to see more of these great pieces from you, you manage to have an excellent flow with your writes, keep going. This will be getting an awesome five stars. 😁😁👍 Jen
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Review of Without a trace.  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello drgn-kpr,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem "Without A Trace" firstly the title was spot on for this write, you did a great job with this short piece, I like they way you choose certain words to bring this poem to life, the flow of the poem was also spot on, I encountered no problems whilst reading this write and I noted no errors, a big thumbs up on this one. Look forward to seeing more pieces from you. Keep writing 😁👍 Lady
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