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Review of Hillside Dream 1  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Chazzz,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem "Hillside Dream" firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write,I loved your word choice as it helped to bring your poem to life, this piece was vivid in beauty and colour and gave me a lovely feeling.a lovely written piece and I thank you for allowing us to read it. 😁😁👍
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Review of Mr. Wiggles  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey Angus,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your story "Mr Wiggles" Well what can I say, absolutely loved it my friend 😁😁 I was glued to this write, couldn't wait to know what happened in the end, need to read more of these from you. Overall impression. Spot on, brilliant. Want some more of these my friend. Jen
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Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Wolfbane,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem "Dance in the Yard" firstly the title was spot on for the content of this piece, I loved your word choice as it helped to bring your poem to life, the flow of this write was also very good, you have managed to give this piece great imagery and my favourite was the Last two lines,
So I'll throw rose pedals onto the ground,
To show you my love as we dance around.,
This beautifully written piece was a delight to read and I thank you for sharing it with us, I spotted no errors.😁😁👍 Keep writing Lady
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Review of Daffodil Dreams  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Fyn,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group, I saw this on the read and review, so I thought I would take a look and drop you a review, firstly the title was spot on for this write, how delightful this was, beautifully written and very smooth to read, I think daffodil are a beauty wherever they are, your word choice here was fantastic and it helped to bring you piece to life, an absolute pleasure to read and I spotted no errors.😁😁👍 definitely keep writing Lady
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Review of Weapon's Weavings  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Fyn,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem "Weapons Weavings" firstly the title was spot on for the content of this piece,I loved your word choice, it helped to bring your poem to life, the write flowed well and I encountered no problems whilst reading, it was a pleasure to read and I also spotted no errors. My overall impression of the poem, it was an excellent piece. Keep writing 😁😁👍 Lady
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Review of Kayla  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Sophy,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem "Kayla" firstly the title of this piece was so on for the content of the poem, it's amazing how a dog 🐶 just knows when you need comfort, even in tears they still seem to get a laugh from you, you did very well with this write, I enjoyed it very much and it made me smile 😁😁👍 thank you for sharing your beautiful piece with us. Lady

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Review of Warm  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Chris Breva,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem "Warm" firstly the title was spot on for this write, and warm it was, your choice of words brought this poem to life. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this very heartwarming piece, the flow was also spot on. I thank you for allowing us to read such a beautifully written poem.😁😁👍
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Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Harry,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem "Aerial Water Vapour" firstly the title of this piece drew me in and I'm sure glad I did, what a beautiful writ with excellent word choice that helped to bring the poem to life, it was a smooth read with no complications, I also spotted no errors, It was a pleasure to read and look forward to more pieces like this from you. 😁😁👍 keep writing Lady
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Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Hello Pat,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your piece "A Soul Shrouded in Shame" firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write, and what a write it was, a beautifully written piece with excellent word choice that brought the poem to life, I couldn't say there was a favourite part, it was all lovely, I thank you for the pleasure of allowing us to read this beautiful piece of poetry. Keep writing 😁😁👍 Lady
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Review of That Last Fall  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello SB Musing,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem "That Last Fall" firstly the title was spot on for the content of this piece, I enjoyed this write very much, there's truly nothing like just tacking up and off you go, horses have been my life since very young up until just a few years back, when I had a very bad accident I was forced to giving them up, but I still think about them to this day, the write flowed beautifully and the word choice helped to bring the poem to life, it was a pleasure to read and I spotted no errors. Look forward to reading more pieces from you. Take care 😁👍 Lady
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Review of Aftermath  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Sophy,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem "Aftermath" this was a spot on title for the content of this write, it drew me in and I definitely wanted to carry on reading it till the end, your word choice helped to bring this poem to life and I thank you for the pleasure of allowing us to read this excellent write, if you have a moment maybe you could take a look at a piece of mine called 21 years or The Black Beast, many thanks Sophy, it was a great pleasure. 😁😁👍
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Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Prosperous Snow,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem "Listen To The Trees" firstly the title was spot on, and drew me in to wanting to read this beautifully written piece, your choice of words brought this poem to life, a truly delightful, my favourite being,

Listen
and you will hear them say:
"Our roots
hold the planet's soil in place
and reduce erosion;
we inhale carbon dioxide
we exhale oxygen;
we provide the human race with food,
shelter,
and warmth;
our only request
is that you planet a tree or two
for each one you cut down."

Overall Impression, it was a delight to read this beautiful write and I thank you for the pleasure. Keep writing 😁😁👍 Lady
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Review of A Lost Soul  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Angel,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem " A Lost Soul" firstly the title was spot on for the content of this piece, this was a beautifully written poem and the word choice brought the poem to life, no errors were spotted and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it, my favourite being

Where is the spirit
I once knew, the lively, bright
Soul, adventurer

Overall, this was an excellent write and I thank you for the pleasure of allowing us to read it. 😁😁👍 keep writing, Lady.
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Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Carly,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem "Grateful Hearts Bring Peace" firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write, this was a beautifully written piece with excellent rhythm and rhyme, your word choice helped to bring the poem to life and I spotted no errors, overall I thoroughly enjoyed the read and I thank you for the pleasure of sharing such a lovely poem with us. 😁😁👍 Lady
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Review of My Critter Zoo  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Espero,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your piece "My Critters Zoo" firstly the title was spot on for the content of this poem, you have managed to do a great job with this, the rhythm and rhyming were also very good, loved you word choice as it helped to bring the poem to life, overall a beautifully written piece, look forward to reading more pieces from you 😁👍 take care Lady
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Review of Hapenis  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Hunters Moon,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your piece "Willywacker" no sorry wrong name lol, "Hapines" maybe I shouldn't review so quickly after reading this pics lol, an absolute brilliant job, laughed all the way through this, great rhythm and rhyming was also spot on, this is a definite five stars, he made me a little scared though lol 😁 😆👍, I think it was a pleasure to read. Lady


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Review of " The Waterfall "  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello my friend,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your piece "Waterfall" firstly the title is spot on for this write, once again you have knocked it out the park, bang on, beautiful,awesome my friend 😁 you can rhyme with your eyes shut. An absolute pleasure to read. Loved it.😁😁👍 Take care Lady
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Review of A Mother's Nature  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Tree nut in progress,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem "A Mothers Nature" firstly the title was spot on for the content of this piece, you have done a beautiful job with this, the words chosen bring the poem to life, the flow of the write allowed the poem to read easy and I encountered no problems whilst reading it, no errors were spotted, overall a very beautiful written piece of poetry, it was an an absolute pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing. Take care 😁👍 Lady
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Review of Beauty  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello SilverRaven,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your piece "Beauty" firstly the title is spot on for the content of this piece, a poem about your lovely horse Duke with his flowing mane and tail, there is a nice flow to this write, overall a nice piece that was a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing this with us. Keep writing 😁👍 Lady
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Review of Thoughts on Aging  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello HuntersMoon,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem "Thoughts on Aging" firstly the title was spot on and drew me in to wanting to read this piece from start to finish. Well I thoroughly enjoyed this write and I couldn't of said it better myself, live life to the full, each and every day because you never know what's around the corner, we are all going to get to the finishing line but there's no point worrying about it every day. The flow of the poem was good and the rhythm and rhyming were also spot on, overall, a fantastic write, thank you for allowing us to read your beautifully written poem. Take care Lady 😁😁👍
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Review of The Silken Strand  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your piece " The Silken Strand" firstly the title of this poem was spot on, Well what can I say, I found this to be an exceptional written piece with beautiful flow and an excellent word choice that brought this poem to life. Thankyou for allowing us to enjoy such a fantastic write. Take care 😁😁👍 Lady
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Review of Patience  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Jaya,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your piece "Patience" firstly the title is spot on for the content of this poem, well, what a beautifully written piece, the flow was excellent running through each stanza, I encountered no problems with this write, a truly beautiful written poem with no errors from what I could see, my favourite was the second stanza,

too must wait
sometimes in the dark
sometimes in light
for dreams to realize
for plans to materialize

Thank you for sharing such a lovely poem. Take care 😁👍 Lady may I ask if you have a moment would you be able to take a look at maybe Blood Money or 21 years for me, many thanks
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Review of Youth Grown Old  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Kenzie,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your piece "Youth Grown Old, firstly your title was spot on for the content of this beautifully written poem, your word choice was lovely and helped to bring the poem to life, the flow of the piece was very smooth which made it a delight to read, I also spotted no errors. Thanks for sharing your poem with us, it was a pleasure to read. 😁👍 take care Lady
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Review of The Muse  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Shubham,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your piece "Muse" Firstly the title drew me in to read this delightful poem, your word choice was exceptional and brought the poem to life, the flow of the piece was also very smooth and I spotted no errors, my favourite being the third stanza,

Hear oh hear call of the divine

Emerge out of your little own confine

Cross the line, It’s your time to shine,

Let them flow, the words benign

Thankyou so much for sharing this beautiful piece, it was a pleasure to read 😁👍 take care Lady
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Review of Spider's Web  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Raven Sharp,

Lady Elf here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your piece Spider's Web" firstly the title was spot on for the content of this poem, I loved the choice of words which brought this poem to life, my favourite being,

The strength of everlasting threads,
held up by pretty flower’s heads,
standing ‘gainst the winds that blow,
against the dew and rain and snow.

You've done a great job with this write and it was a pleasure to read.If you have a moment it would be great if you could take a look at a piece of mine called 21 years, many thanks 😁👍 keep writing Lady
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