I loved the imagery coming off these words and lines from you. Your expressive manner is very good. A very poetic swagger to this piece. I couldn't help but feel pain from you here. I could see a hurt and suffering female here, the pain of living. You are a neat little writer, keep expressing and venting. Good work and write on!!
I thought your poem here was excellent throughout. Lovely rhymes held here. Good flowing lines. There was fine art here in the way you wrote this out. It was very clever. Nice imagery came from the words and lines. I really enjoyed this great piece from you. Nice work and write on!!!
I liked the romantic sway in this piece from you. I think you expressed yourself very well here. A good length for a poem, not too long and not too short. This is why writing poetry is such a gift, it lets us vent our inner selves. Nice work and write on !!
I thought this poem from you was rather good. I enjoyed reading this through. Nice font and nice presentation on the page. There was a poetic power to your words and lines here. I was gripped from start to finish. I found no errors and no way to improve the item. Good work.
I liked the positivity of the story held here. I love cats with blue eyes, the Siamese breed are particulary wise and clever. A nice theme and nice fresh feeling to this poem. I liked the presentation too. A good length for a poem, not too long and not too short. Nice work.
I enjoyed reading this through. I believe there are angels in and around everyone too. Every human is special in their own unique way. Acts of kindness is an act of an angel. I liked this theme you chose. I liked the way you wrote this out and I also liked the positivity which came from the words and lines. Nice work.
I thought your item here was special. You summed up the intentions of man very well. I liked the hypnotic way you wrote this out. You reminded me of Stanley Cubrick's space oddessy. I enjoyed reading this through, it was very clever of you. Great work and write on !!
I loved the this poem from you, it was great from start to finish. Good rhymes, good flowing lines. I kind of liked the heart-ache that I felt for your character here. I was lightly inspired by this piece. There was a good poetic sway about this item. Great work and write on!!!
Nice poetic sway to this piece from you. I liked the emotional theme. A dark subject but you managed to make light of this. Nice presentation and nice sized font. There was an inspiriational pull with your words and lines. Nice work and write on !!
Nice work here. I liked the pattern to this piece. Writing a piece in just 24 syllables is not easy but you did a fine job here. Great imagery came from the words and lines. I really enjoyed reading this work through. Great writing and write on!!
Nice length for an item. You raised some great questions here. My words come to me when I feel like a God and have that inspiriation inside, flowing out for all to see. I think a poem is best when the words flow out and are not forced, just like you said. Nice work and write on!!
Lovely little poem from you. So sweetly perfected. Great flow, great rhythm. I really enjoyed reading this through. You were right to say that we should celebrate this time of year, the warmth of the sun is always beautiful. Nice work and write on!!
I thought your little piece here was very sweetly written. A lovely effect on me. Nice sweet rhymes too. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. A powerful little item. A decent title, matching the poems words and lines. Great work and write on!!
Great font used here, nice effect centered on the page. Nice word crafting, nice rhythm too. A little darker than I am used to but still a great read. The title was very fitting for the poems words and lines. I was gripped from start to finish. Nice writing.
I enjoyed reading this piece through. I liked the rhythm set here. A nice, sweet little poem with a dainty glow to it. The imagery was great that came along with this poem. I couldn't see a way to improve the item. A nice refreshing little read. Good work and write on!!
I thought your little poem here was lovely. Great structure, nice rhymes and good flowing power. Nice word crafting. I found this poem a breath of fresh air and the imagery was good. You have done a fine job here. Your poem will never age. Nice work and write on!!!
I liked the originality of this piece from you. Your inspiration was great. To be able to write a poem from a handprint is awesome. A nice length for and poem, it kept my attention levels up high. I enjoyed reading this little piece through. Good work and write on !!!
Awww, I thought this little piece from you was very sweet and poetic. I loved the imagery that came from each line. I smiled as I read this through. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. I really enjoyed reading this through. Thank you so much for sharing this little beauty. Write on!!
Nice writing. I liked the depth of this piece. Not all poems are flowery and lavish. To me there was good imagery coming from each word and line, I liked the dark feeling here. God sized piece to, it kept my attention levels up high. Nice writing.
Great thinking here. I loved the poetic sway about this little piece. Nicely written and displayed center on the page. A fine piece of writing. I liked the depth and meaning too. You managed to say so much in just a few lines. Good work and write on!!
Lovely rhymes here, nice flowing rhythm too. I enjoyed the poetic power coming from each line. To me there was good imagery coming from the story. This was well written and executed. Nice writing, I enjoyed every word and line. Write on!!
I hope the anger and issues have passed since posting this rant. You expressed yourself very well and it sounded like you were at the end of your patience. This is what writing is all about, expressing, venting, harnessing feelings and thoughts. Nice work and write on!!
Great rhymes and great rhythm to this piece from you. A simple yet effective poem. I really liked the sweet nature of each line. I also liked the positive theme here. Nice sized poem keeping my attention levels up high. An enjoyable read, thank you.
Aww. I thought this piece from you was very emotional and powerful to me. I loved the flowing rhymes and rhythm. You expressed yourself so very well here. This was very well written by you. I really enjoyed the emotional ride you gave me here. Thank you for writing such a beauty.
I thought this piece of writing from you was beautiful. Summing up your surroundings so very well. There was an air of freedom in this piece. Great imagery came from each line. Nicely presented on the page. The poetic power here was great, beautiful and loving. Good work and write on !!
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