I related very well to your poem here, it was exactly the same for me when I was young. Nice flowing rhythm, nice feelings about this work. I have written about the younger days too, it makes great poetry. You did a fine job here. Good work.
Just popped in for a bit. I picked this poem because of the picture you used as the cover. The hand being held out called to me. The poems words were superb, strong, noble and powerful. The grace of the higher power was evident here. The positivity which came with this piece was beautiful. Well presented on the page. I enjoyed the lovely feel of this poem. Great work.
Well presented on the page, looks great. I liked the poetic sway to this piece. The romantic power was great. There was good imagery coming from the words and lines. I really liked the last two lines, they summed the sweetness of the poem up really well. Good work and write on!!!
I read this through because the title was very attractive to me. I enjoyed this piece from you. There was good imagery coming from the story you told. The ending was special and inspired me to think. I think you took a piece of truth from a real veteran, I mean, this poem could easily be a true story. It was very real to me. Great work.
I liked the depth of your writing here in this piece. I feel this came from the heart when you wrote it out. I also liked the philosophy here. The voice in our heads can be very deep sometimes and lead us astray. I am guessing this is a letter to yourself? I related to it quite well.
Great rhyme and flow to your poem here. The flow was almost musical and it was very joyful. Lovely descriptive words and lines. I do believe special things happen in summers evening, where the sun sets with love for all. I enjoyed reading your poem through. Good work.
I thought your poem here was very original by theme. I liked the way you ended this writing, you made me smile. The imagery coming from your words and lines was great. A nice refreshing piece of work from you. The title was fitting for the poem. Nice work and write on!!!
I love your positivity here in this writing. Your mindset is always so happy and vibrant. I believe in miracles too. I think people could learn from you how to conduct themselves. A positive outlook is always a good start. Yes, writing.com is an awesome website for writers.
After reading this through, I felt an immense sense of freedom. I loved your carefree attitude here. There was great imagery coming from this little poem. It seems like you lived your younger years to the fullest. An interesting story to write about. I enjoyed it all.
I thought your writing here was great, I was gripped to every word and line. Your grammar and story telling was good. You painted a lovely picture with your words. The philosophy was indeed special. The length of the story was inviting and kept my attention levels up high. I enjoyed reading this work through.
Wow, this was an amazing piece of writing. I loved the flow and the rhymes were great. A lavish feel to this poem. This writing cannot be improved, it is perfect the way it is. It sounds like we have the same souls, vibrant, deep, powerful. I loved the poetic sway about this poem. It was beautiful to read through. Great work and write on!!!
I enjoyed reading your story through. The grammar flowed smoothly and you told the story very well. There was great imagery coming from the words and lines. I did however find the story to be beauitful in the begining but very, very sad in the end. Good work and write on!!!
The meaning of this poem was lovely. Such a beautiful piece of writing. Your rhymes were great and the flow was amazing. I really enjoyed reading this through. A warming, heartfelt poem. The poem is written from fact and that makes it special. Good work.
I thought this was written perfectly. There was a beauty about this poem from you. The love was deep and I felt the romance growing and dying at the same time. I also felt the pain of a love that has lost its way. Lovely expressions, lovely tone to your work here. Nice flowing poem. Good work.
I thought this poem from you was excellent. I loved how well you expressed yourself. I also related very well to what you had written. Fact or fiction this was a lovely read. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. I hope you find peace soon. Good writing.
I thought your little poem was very funny. I dont know if you meant to be funny, its just how I percieved you. I would like to know what you have to surrender to? The art of writing poetry and expressing oneself was very evident here. I enjoyed reading your poem through. Good work.
Nicely written and nicely executed. Good word flow and good rhythm and rhyme. I liked the depth of this piece from you. I took comfort in knowing that I am not the only one who holds back words and feelings, although different circumstances. A great piece written from honesty and with power. Good work and write on!!!
I read this piece through and related to the philosophy used here. I liked the depth of the subject. This is a poem for people who think deeply and understand what lay ahead for youngsters. You made me think of my own life and how it has passed me by so quickly. Looking back to the school days, playing in the playground, maybe some of us are not ready for adulthood. A very thought provoking piece. Good work.
I thought this was quite well written, better than you gave yourself credit for. The title drew me in and the words to the poem were quite rewarding. It goes to show that not everyone is living a blissful life, now, then or tomorrow. I think you expressed yourself very clearly and I enjoyed reading this through. Keep writing, posting and expressing yourself.
I thought this was written perfectly, lovely poetic sway and power. You have a good sense for mystic poetry and have good word crafting skills. I really enjoyed reading this poem through. I found no way of improving your item, it was great the way it is. Good writing and good work.
I thought this was a lovely little poem from you. Great flowing rhymes, great rhythm too. There was a poetic power to your poem here. The title matched the poems words and lines so very well. I really enjoyed reading this through. I liked the philosophy used in this poem. Good work and write on!!!
I thought your little piece of writing here was interesting. The originality of what you decided to write about was great. A believer will welcome this poem from you, as do I. The philosophy that time repeats itself. A nice spiritual feeling came across me as I read this through. Good work and write on!!!
See, this poem from you is why I come to writing.com. When I review, I hope to find a beauitful piece of writing. I did just that, I found this poem from you to be swift, lavish, pretty and special. The rainfall does have a scent and it brings life to the world. A beauitful poem from you. I loved the poetic power.
I thought your poem here was nice, I enjoyed the flowing rhythm. The poem had good structure and was well ballanced. I think you described the love of music quite well here, I particually liked the knee slapping line. Music can heal and roll along side our pains very well. I enjoyed reading this through, good work.
I related so very well to your writing here. At 51 I feel I am decaying too. A good, original theme for a poem. I liked your honesty here. A nice length for a poem, keeping my attention levels up high. I enjoyed reading this through. Good work and write on!!
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